45 mins deadline from this post tyme...
good luck

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Seriously Blank, I Don’t Ever think Ive Seen a Worse Rhyme..
When You Lose Don’t Complain, Nobody Read’s Past Your First Line
Il Attack This Dude, Rob Him Of His Prude Yeah That’s Some2 Chew
Backslap You Crew, They Claim To B Vets But There As Wak As You
I’ll Get Rid Of This Punk- Quick, Ya Best Be Zippin Them Cunt Lips
Cause Your Structure Iz Built From Herbs That I Done-Ripped…
Im havin none-of-this, Blankz Don’t Know Im Back Here Runing Shit
Hit By a Ton Of Bricks,My Crewl Intention Iz Jus Capital Punshiment
Proposterous, Another Challenge, How Many Time’s Have I Jus Wrecked Novices
It Gets Me Hetic Watchin it, Cuz Im More Anxious To Spit Than at Dentist Offices

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bLanKz a father figure nigga..im sonnin herbs lik you, only tyme overdrive flows is from anal puncture wounds/
i love stompin dudes... cuz im used to hearing understatements, but i didn't think u'd stoop that low, to battle me when your styll under pavement/
it takes some brave men...to step to me and u did it for fun, constant punchlines to your throat leave u sounding wack lik you had hellium etched in your lungs/
ma minds 'programmed' for perfection, thats why ma 'words' are 'perfect'...Overdrive you lik tha 'ring' leader of a gay circus...
....and i'm tired of battleing mans that drop tha soap on purpose!!/
your a joke if u think you can hurt this..your worthless, your 'threads' couldn't b 'hot' if you dryed your 'cloths in a furnace'///

i made tha deadline...sorry for tha structure my computer strechtes tha shytt.......let tha voting begin!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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flowverdrive,lines werent as stretched
punches:blankz...juss more aimed at da opponent
vocabverdrive, juss a lil more advanced
multisverdrive

voteverdrive.............but i cant poll vote

o shit lemme do this shit again..................................

flow: overdrive,lines werent as stretched
punches:blankz...juss more aimed at da opponent
vocab: overdrive, juss a lil more advanced
multis: overdrive

vote: overdrive.............but i cant poll vote

fair enuff...but i thnk ma lines automatically looked stretched juss becuz of tha way tha computer has it displayed.....
^^^^^^UPPIN

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this one was close....

flow: blankz (a little more complex, I enjoyed the structure & flow - overdrive you had good flow too, but it was a little more basic)
punches: overdrive (barely edged him out though)
personals: eh, not really
enjoyability: tie

vote = overdrive for punches

yo hit this up yall
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77495

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1-0...ko guy is a hate vote...ma crew anb n his crew are battling eachother...thats tha reason why he can't poll vote.............
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