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10-07-05, 06:11 AM | #1 | |||||||
£ivin a £yfe of Çrhyme
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Yea...didn't really put a name to it...but its just a little short key, tell me wat ya think...werd
I'm sittin here all by myself just tryin to think of somethin to do tryin to think of something, anything just to keep from thinkin of you but you know it's not working out cause your always on my mind one thought of you is all it takes to leave the rest of the world behind
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10-07-05, 12:17 PM | #2 | ||||||
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hmmm, i dunno really how too critic this because it was really short, i guess i can say you have good meaning in it but the vocab was basic, it flowed well with what was there, make it longer 1
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10-07-05, 06:06 PM | #3 | ||||
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Closed minimum lines for an OM is 14
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