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12-06-06, 11:23 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Young Sin Speaks
IP: 33E3 44D7
I'm the "ESSENCE OF ROCKS GOING THROUGH WINDOWS AND SHATTERING"//
the "MESSAGE FROM GOD SHOWING YOU KINFOLKS ARE BATTLING"// I've been low with savages, originated from the "GARDEN OF EDEN"// I was "SCARRED AND LEFT BLEEDING" traveled the 'FARTHEST OF REGIONS"// to "BARDER WITH DEMONS" for a lost soul, which is "PART OF THE REASON"// I stopped after I "STARTED BELIEVING" because I could only be a "MARTYR TO HEATHENS"// a Father? didn't need him, I was left "ALONE IN BARS"// a "HOME FOR SCARS" on the "road to success" but someone "STOLE THE CAR"// so a lonely heart was left "COLD INSIDE" no one to "CONSOLE MY MIND"// tears "FLOWED TILL DRIED" so there's no hope, had to cope with a "SOUL THAT DIED"// and I'd float in the notes "COMPOSERS WRITE"// the epitome of my epiphanies was the symphony of tears with "HOPES TO TRY"// but misery's cloaked in pride so that's the "SIDE YOU COULDNT SEE"// attached and "APPLIED TO CROOKED GREED" but I'd "HIDE WITH BOOKS AND READ"// confined a crook in me to "FIND KNOWLEDGE",cant get "INSIDE COLLEGE"// so you try to look for the signs of god with "BLIND OPTICS"// and my prayers are worthless, have you "TRIED TALKING"// to God in "RHYMES OFTEN" but he never could "PROVIDE SOLACE"// but besides all this, honestly, I couldn't "TAKE TO THE DRUGS"// to "GAPE WOUNDS AND CUTS" but they wouldn't be there if I hadn't tried to "REPLACE TRUTH FOR LOVE"// Links:http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3118832 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3118833
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12-06-06, 11:24 AM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 33E3 44D7
I dont hardly ever post on here... but hey I'm lookin for a new home site.... hoping this could be it..... so leave me feed home....
Young Sin aka Chosen Tha Forsaken One
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12-06-06, 11:43 AM | #3 | |||||||
Banned: Pink Slipped
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IP: C2BA 4E39
good shit dog Ballerstatus.com is better if your looking for possitive construtive critisim though keep droppin hot shit son
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12-06-06, 02:20 PM | #4 | |||||
Human Crack in The Flesh.
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IP: 0992 DDA2
BALLIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ay-ya-yo-whoa-whoa, WTF is CHip?
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12-06-06, 02:43 PM | #5 | |||||||
Banned: Pink Slipped
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IP: C2BA 4E39
^^ does this dude ever make any since it's like u got turetts syndrome or somethin on line you really need to take some valume or somethin JOe
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12-06-06, 06:17 PM | #6 | ||||||
Human Crack in The Flesh.
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IP: 0992 DDA2
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Or I could take your mother. Does she count for something shithead?
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12-07-06, 08:17 AM | #7 | |||||||
Banned: Pink Slipped
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IP: C2BA 4E39
Get Your White Wanna Be Arab Ass Outta Here
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12-07-06, 11:36 AM | #8 | ||||||
Human Crack in The Flesh.
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IP: 0992 DDA2
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Um...Black Wanna Be Arab ASS Outta Here* And K illa, your actin' like a real bitch nowadays.
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12-07-06, 12:25 PM | #9 | |||||||
Banned: Pink Slipped
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IP: C2BA 4E39
Black wanna be Arab thats even worse do u even live in the Hood Arabs treat us niggaz as bad as white people. Your a wierdo that makes no sence period
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12-19-06, 08:31 PM | #10 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: 544A 12EA
Dope shit dude.
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12-19-06, 08:33 PM | #11 | |||||
scotia's finest
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IP: EA03 FBCE
killa is ip banned soon anyway just needs one more vote against him
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01-09-07, 11:14 AM | #12 | |||||||
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IP: 33E3 44D7
Man wut tha fuck my thread was onver run wit freeposting mufuckaz
Wow gay shit.... Those that did feed thanks
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01-17-07, 06:06 AM | #13 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 2B95 0529
flow started out really good it was cool for a text peice i guess alot of multis
coabulary was cool there was soem simple metaphores and wordplay nothign too special but ti was cool
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01-17-07, 09:28 AM | #14 | ||||||
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IP: 2DA9 8083
im an audio head now....still do text but i come in cuz i neglect where i came from
ok seems to me like ur in a deep mode right now soooooo I'm the "ESSENCE OF ROCKS GOING THROUGH WINDOWS AND SHATTERING"// the "MESSAGE FROM GOD SHOWING YOU KINFOLKS ARE BATTLING"// (ok) I've been low with savages, originated from the "GARDEN OF EDEN"// I was "SCARRED AND LEFT BLEEDING" traveled the 'FARTHEST OF REGIONS"// (ok) to "BARDER WITH DEMONS" for a lost soul, which is "PART OF THE REASON"// I stopped after I "STARTED BELIEVING" because I could only be a "MARTYR TO HEATHENS"// (i liked that last line....that was a good reversal right there, good multis so far) a Father? didn't need him, I was left "ALONE IN BARS"// a "HOME FOR SCARS" on the "road to success" but someone "STOLE THE CAR"// (hehe ok...coo play) so a lonely heart was left "COLD INSIDE" no one to "CONSOLE MY MIND"// tears "FLOWED TILL DRIED" so there's no hope, had to cope with a "SOUL THAT DIED"// (k) and I'd float in the notes "COMPOSERS WRITE"// the epitome of my epiphanies was the symphony of tears with "HOPES TO TRY"// (like the multis in here and flow in these two) but misery's cloaked in pride so that's the "SIDE YOU COULDNT SEE"// attached and "APPLIED TO CROOKED GREED" but I'd "HIDE WITH BOOKS AND READ"// (k....coo shyt) confined a crook in me to "FIND KNOWLEDGE",cant get "INSIDE COLLEGE"// so you try to look for the signs of god with "BLIND OPTICS"// (k....not bad , kinda nice) and my prayers are worthless, have you "TRIED TALKING"// to God in "RHYMES OFTEN" but he never could "PROVIDE SOLACE"// (coo shyt) but besides all this, honestly, I couldn't "TAKE TO THE DRUGS"// to "GAPE WOUNDS AND CUTS" but they wouldn't be there if I hadn't tried to "REPLACE TRUTH FOR LOVE"// (multis were kinda eh here...seemed a lil forced with the rhymin and all.....) all in all deep piece, im def feelin the content/subject matter here.......this is more of a spoken word piece so if u ever convert this to audio....just make it one of those beats where theres nothin too hard but its like just somethin u can chill too and let this piece out |
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