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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
S.Carter 1 16.67%
DeLeon 5 83.33%
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Old 05-01-04, 05:43 PM   #1
DeLeon
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From: Sa-Town
S.Carter Vs. DeLeon

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yo check it here are the rules

no crew
D/R
or
hate votes

no feedin either

10-15 lines you drop first alright?

Lets get it started
 
Old 05-01-04, 05:45 PM   #2
DeLeon
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From: Sa-Town
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Check in so I know you going to Show..............
 
Old 05-01-04, 05:49 PM   #3
S.Carter
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Check in..........................................
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Old 05-01-04, 06:05 PM   #4
DeLeon
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When are you going to drop ya verse??????????????????????
 
Old 05-01-04, 06:13 PM   #5
S.Carter
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Southside Chi-Town let me show you how we get down
Fuck around you get chopped and bagged like a pound

I spit Ether but my shit better than StillMattic
Yo raps sound like you a fuckin Crack Attic

Look Deleon you should of left it alone
Yo cd a make less money than a half a zone

Thats bout 25 dollars need some skills just holla
You the little dirt that fly off when I pop my collar

Who colder S.Carter But kid dont get me confuse with hova
You couldn't make it to the top even if you stood on my shoulders

I spit bolders that a fuck you up
16brs from me it a shut you up

Have you scared he probally one of them No shows
With no goals get beat up like corner hoe

I seen yo crew yall just trying to copy us
Middle finger up to the DirtySouth Mafia
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Old 05-01-04, 06:17 PM   #6
DeLeon
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alright dogg didnt like that closer........lol lol
 
Old 05-01-04, 06:19 PM   #7
DeLeon
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16 bars...... i said 10-15 guess i win you went over

HAH just playing dogg dont get scared
 
Old 05-01-04, 06:56 PM   #8
DeLeon
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From: Sa-Town
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Damn! Son you must be stupid fuckin around with -tha MOB/
I heard you was a cocksucker-dont quit your day JOB!/
You another one of these rooks -tryin to tame this/
you enlisted in Da Army-must be why your pro-claimed the lam-est/
Im killin this kid with my Lyrical Gram-mer/
You couldnt smash my shit even if i gave you a ham-mer/
Who ever told you-you could win against me was lyin to- ya/
cause my lyrics slice your face open like a fucken Vagi--na/
runnin over this kid like my name was grave digger/
takin ya out when I load my glock-cock it then pull the trigger/
Damn son Im straight- but you's a FAG/
This shits Over someone ready a body bag/
you comin off soft like Bette Mitler/
im burin this kid out like tha holocust so you can call me hitler/
Im droppin hott game-while leavin your ass clue-less/
this shit hittin harder than DeLa Hoya boxin Lennox Lewis/
 
Old 05-01-04, 07:35 PM   #9
DeLeon
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yall get that closer?

Hoya light weight
Lewis heavy weight-so hoya gettin killed
 
Old 05-01-04, 07:56 PM   #10
White Light
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DeLeon:

Flow- your flow was really good... the structure added 2 it...

Punches- you had a couple here and there... and when u did they hit pretty hard...

Personals- you had a hand full of personals all of which hit pretty hard... this was your strongest area in ur battle... espicially
You couldnt smash my shit even if i gave you a ham-mer/ and...
im burin this kid out like tha holocust so you can call me hitler/

Vocab- pretty complex vocab... very good from ur side...

Originality- i would have to say ur lines were pretty original... played out well over all 8/10...

Beggining and End: you started strong and kept it that way throught the battle...


S.Carter

Flow- flow was good/ok... ur structure wasn't that good so i didn't really add anything 2 it...

Punches- ok u had a few... the few that u had didn't hit that hard... pretty weak...

Personals- u had some personals the ones that u did have were pretty good... espicially...
Who colder S.Carter But kid dont get me confuse with hova
You couldn't make it to the top even if you stood on my shoulders

Vocab- vocab wasn't to complex but there was some good vocab ocassionally...

Originality- a couple of ur lines were original... over all ok verse... i would say 7/10

Beggining and End: you started off strong and in the last 4 verses u lost it...

Winner: DeLeon
mainly because of his complex vocab and his personals and punchlines hit alot harder
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Old 05-01-04, 08:01 PM   #11
Pop Lotty
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This Battle Was Kinda Weak But Ill Give It To Deleon Cuz He Came More Consistently Wit His Rhymes, Most Of Them Were Average Nuttin To Weak
S. Had Some Alright Stuff But Some Of His Stuff Was Weak,deleon Also Had A Better Vocab And His Shit Flowed Better
Vote:deleon
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Old 05-01-04, 08:23 PM   #12
DeLeon
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From: Sa-Town
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uppin lets get some votes up in this bitch.........
 
Old 05-01-04, 08:34 PM   #13
K-Trin
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flow-S. Carter
punches-S.Carter--I especially like that closer bout Leon's crew
creativity-Deleon--That closer bout boxing was good.

Overall-OK battle.But Carter had this thing

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Old 05-01-04, 08:37 PM   #14
DeLeon
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alright whatever dogg

lets get some more votes in this bitch
 
Old 05-01-04, 08:51 PM   #15
DeLeon
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lets get some more votes in here....................
 
 


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