Yeah not whole song but yeah.. umm quality is eh,, imma re-record it wen i get good mic, n flow or delivery may be off cuz i recorded it once without trying to make flow good n just saved it n put it online .. but yeah.. check it out..

Www.Myspace.com/Dabatos

or

Www.Soundclick.com/Dabatos
2nd song on page

imma get links now

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2437243

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Peepin.....likin the beat alot, a very nice laid back love type beat, lovin the "la lalalalala bit " lol, aiite youre comin in, vocals a lil low, but flow is on point, mic presence is a lil low I think need to be more confident, but likin lyrics alot, "God took his time to crreate" good line right there......keep it up dawg...7/10...RTF to my track - Let Me Free

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208553

THANNKKS!!!!!

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www.soundclick.com/dollaback

word thanx for the feed.. i''ll rtf tomorrow fam.. thanx though

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listening....your intro is kinda week...you need to show more emotion when your talkin...say it like u mean it type deal.....

sample seems a lil low for the beat.....your vocals are also a lil low...

pretty coo how u come in on a singing type deal....sounds pretty good actually

ok now u start rappin...ok you kinda tend to slur your words a bit...work on that...flow is ok...it could be a lil more complex in my opinion...but not bad....your delivery is ok...but i still think that can be upped to certain degree also...your mic presence isnt all there in my opinion here...its like theres something missing to it...i dunno....

not a bad track....hopefully i helped out some......

PLEASE return the favor....... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208403

itd be much appreciated

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yeah u helped out.. but i guess u didnt read my post .. i sed i didnt try in this verse lol.. imma re-record it wen i get my good mic lol.. but yeah thanx for the feed fam i'll rtf soon

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damn that beats sick as hell

flow-7.5/10
presense-8/10
beat-10/10
voice-8/10
quality-5/10
overall-7.5/10

overall this aint that bad of a track...ya flow was nice...the beat was hot and ya lyrics were cool...i'm feelin this track..i like ya switchs up and ya back-ups fit well...just work on the quality...good stuff man...

~1

rtf
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208933

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Liking the beat, sample is real nice, bit too low maybe but still. You improved a lot since last stuff I've seen from you in fact. Flow might be rather basic but you hold it down nicely you know. Lyrics are great, emotion was there but might be worked on bit more. That's the hardest part of it all probably, delivering a song with raw emotion yet keeping focused on flow and shit. But keep doing what you do, I definitely see you getting better and better.

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okay i know you already stated it above but your flow was off. your emotion could be upped just a little to make it feel as though you really mean what you say. the beat was cool. overall not a bad track.