yup

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4118341

found the beat on soundclick,kinda story of my life


i left feed on swolled up from Past Tense and poppas from Jae Stackz

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aiight peepin'....


beat starting coo...

come in with pretty coo emotion. Kinda hard to hear some of the shit you saying. flow is coo, kinda going too quick for yourself. So since you going so fast, you having trouble pronouncing some shit clearly. But flow is getting better as it goes on. shit, I really like this hook. lol sound like some eminem way of doing hook. recording in two dif voices. good shit tho man overall. Enjoyed this. stay up. 8/10

RTF if you can:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230662

EZ

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thx man apreciate it, ill rtf in 30 seconds

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Listenin, theres mad hiss when you come in...your pronounciation is gettin better, a lil hard to hear..flow is decent too the main thing about this track is your energy thats nice..and ure delivery is hot..and lyrics are good..hook is delivered nice..but lyrically weak...this was an aight track...

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finaly, thanks.

Not bad, this is probably top 3 for my fav's from you. Your lyrics were hot man, flow was pretty good as well. A little shaky on some lines but it's not that noticable. Your delivery could use more power, having more power with a non american accent would be a mad good thing. It'd show that you believe in yaself, I suggest you trying to do a song on a real gangsta beat, but try and get somin off soundclick. I don't really mean gangsta beat but somin bangin you know. But uh also I think if you found a way to say your rhymes better like how you end the line with the rhyme, it'd be nice if you said the rhyme better cuz sometimes I don't catch it cuz you outta breath or something. but overall not bad, keep it up man.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230629

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*listening*


well speats is gd so what wud go wrong on this?...


beat is nice as hell...


dude u got a decent breathe control...


You Flowed nice and steady on this....

Track is short but was worth giving ears to...


...nice and decent as 4 me


-wun-

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thanks alot....

Listening..

Beat is pretty grimey, I like it..You some in a little off, rushing the flow at first, but not too too bad..Eh, starting to rush it again..It seems like you're trying to fit too many words into a line because it's hard to understand what you're saying..Lol at the singing hook, nice.

Overall, Decent track bro. RTF at my Goodnight's Sleep track.

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Yeah aightt.....

First off the beat is madd dope,i love it,flow nice i like your delivery real energenitic,i like it cause it fits into the track a lot,emotion is real nice...i can tell its deep,its got that...factor to it iunno what it is,lol,These beats really fit your voice,you have a unique accent man,this is the type of beat that fits it really well,your delivery is also good for the track because it fits in with your emotion and blends together well...The lyrics,well,they are dope,im realy feelin em,they are really deep man....I like this hook you can sing well..Sing more often!!! I like it,fits into the beat real well man.....i would have left more feed if the track was longer but from what i hear its nice,flow is gettin MUCH better,i heard you fall off once i think...so props on that good shit

Can you RTF Here plz:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230833

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