i called out...he answered...

10 lines
no biting
no crew/hate votes
no feeding
u spit first
ill post right after i see that uve dropped

good luck...

In.

ill post right after u...

try and have ur verse posted today...

Check.....................
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you couldnt "cut it" with me if we were siamese twins in surgery
its simple mathmatics you aint even half a man, let alone a third of me
I'm sick of throwin' punchlines at ya guts, I'ma start spittin kicks at ya nuts
you aint gangsta, the only thing you seem to keep gangbangin' is butts
You must be forgettin, you weak and need a weapon
cause "fuckin" with flex you should never leave "protection"
Somebody get da editor this guy is broken you about to die soaken
Ya chances of beating me is like a cyclops sleeping with one eye open
Your shit cant be read full of dreams and bold words
So automatic with hot shit…call me a blunt roller….cause I fold herbs.......

blah.....keyed in 5 minutes........i got to get in da shower.........

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yo...im about to roll to an orthodontist appointment, then i gotta go to my dads house...and im goin out tonight, so i wont be able to post until tomorrow morning... (like 1 am to 3 am) so when i get on later ill key up my verse...

pre writing is gay, so fuck doin that shit...pretty decent verse though

...but ill key when i get back online...and thats word...

pz.

ha ha ha...another person with all wordplay, but no personals...

...check it out...yo, yo...

im rough when i plow through u...man just stop actin tough and ask how
cause we all know theres no need for flex...
...as my muscles are big enough now!
ur stuff is chow...as i collect my dues, i keep goin and just wreck ur crew
and i would give u props for ur ill intentionz...but they already rejected u!
i infect ur view...u cant see me...as ur loss is earned for bein plenty gay
and then flex got some determination...
...only to be the last person on the roster anyway!*
u should get many Ls a day...ur not on time with ill...i just through ur cue
and flex is so short in his rhymes...
...hes forced to use the same tryout for 2 crews!**
i drop few boos, ur shit puts me to sleep...so i leave with ur mind rattled
and when someone says they suck in bitchslapped...
...its no surprise flex is the first to ask for a battle!***

*flex is in determination...hes the last person listed on the roster.

**he tryed out for jury, and ill intentionz with the same exact verse.

***hotshh! made a thread in bitchslapped called '4 da last time, set up a battle, im new and i suck(fresh meat!)'...and flex was the first one to reply when he said that hell battle

and thats word.

Good battle.. both came decent with totally different styles..

Opener - Flex
Closer - Mim
Structure - Mim
Flow - Flex
Punches - Mim
Metas - Flex
Personals - Mim, obviously

Was pretty close.. Flex, you came pretty hard, but in the end, I think Mim's personal punches gave him the upper edge.. Hot shit though.. Much respect to both of you..

OVERALL - Mimesis


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ay this is hot shit and that is true what he said, mimises was better but i cant vote right now i eill in a minute

gotta give this mimesis, his opener wudnt to good but all his personals definately made up for that, was killin it with them personals dawg

and flex, i really liked yo wordplay but like mimesis said you had no personals whatsoever, clever flow tho

my vote still goes to mimesis

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flex...your verse was all wordplay...it was ok but that doesnt win battles....punches and personals wins battles..you had a couple that were decent...but it wasnt enough to win...your flow was on point...and structure was good....but you were missin personals...keep elavatin...

mimesis...good drop....your punches hit hard....flow was on point and structure was good...your opener and closer ripped him.....keep it up

vote/mimesis
....for overall better verse......

^^thanx for the votes...

UPPIN # 1 !!!

leave a link and ill return the favor...

UPPIN # 2 !!!

...lets get some more votes all up in dis peice...

you couldnt "cut it" with me if we were siamese twins in surgery
its simple mathmatics you aint even half a man, let alone a third of me
ehh..iis iight..nuttin special 6/10
I'm sick of throwin' punchlines at ya guts, I'ma start spittin kicks at ya nuts
you aint gangsta, the only thing you seem to keep gangbangin' is butts
lmao..a lil homo 4 me..iight punchline..7/10
You must be forgettin, you weak and need a weapon
cause "fuckin" with flex you should never leave "protection"
bad punchline..whack..juss braggin urself 5/10
Somebody get da editor this guy is broken you about to die soaken
Ya chances of beating me is like a cyclops sleeping with one eye open
good punchline..good 8/10
Your shit cant be read full of dreams and bold words
So automatic with hot shit…call me a blunt roller….cause I fold herbs.......
HAH...nice closer i liked that..nice nice..9/10

35/50

im rough when i plow through u...man just stop actin tough and ask how
cause we all know theres no need for flex...
...as my muscles are big enough now!
HAH! nice opener..nice personal aswell 9/10
ur stuff is chow...as i collect my dues, i keep goin and just wreck ur crew
and i would give u props for ur ill intentionz...but they already rejected u!
lmao..if thas true..nice personal..once again..a notehr good line 8/10
i infect ur view...u cant see me...as ur loss is earned for bein plenty gay
and then flex got some determination...
...only to be the last person on the roster anyway!*
lmao..is this a personal battle for Mimesis..good personal..8/10
u should get many Ls a day...ur not on time with ill...i just through ur cue
and flex is so short in his rhymes...
...hes forced to use the same tryout for 2 crews!**
iight..gettin a lil sick of the crew shit now..calm it down..6/10
i drop few boos, ur shit puts me to sleep...so i leave with ur mind rattled
and when someone says they suck in bitchslapped...
...its no surprise flex is the first to ask for a battle!***
lmao..nice personal..heh..this whole battle was thru personals and was good punchlines well done! 9/10

I'm too lazy to add this up..Mimesis won it if u look at da scores..Blah

Vote-Mimesis
[b]Can yall please vote on my current battle, heres the link! Please!
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133085

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