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MeTaFo' | 5 | 100.00% | |
Intermental | 0 | 0% | |
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08-19-05, 10:48 AM | #1 | |
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MeTaFo' vs Intermental
IP: C70E 4C61
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08-19-05, 10:49 AM | #2 | |
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IP: C034 9442
MeTaFo' has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-05 10:49 AM.
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08-19-05, 11:02 AM | #3 | |
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IP: C70E 4C61
Intermental has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-05 11:02 AM.
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08-19-05, 11:03 AM | #4 | |
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IP: C70E 4C61
Silly Faggot' Dicks-Are-For- Chicks', Fuck-Ya'-Verse, It's Time To -Deflower- This Trick'...
Like A To-Be-Continued-Movie', It's Time I Put An Ending -To -This'.. Can't Think Of Lines' To Defend- Yourself - With',{Damn}..../ Give Me Ya' Diss-Verse Before You Dis-Perse And I'll Write Da' Ending- To-It..../ : Got your knees shakin' when my-rhymes-rattle-ya-balance-like-gats.../ I awaken wastin-my-time-battlin'-talentless-cats... you ain't even fit - to- lick' my shoes, your rhymes are- lower- class like a backwards digestive system, you get Fed-UP your ass
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08-19-05, 11:34 AM | #5 |
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: C034 9442
LOL, My nigga Intermental...Whassup bwoy?
Remember first floor? haha...yupp... Cant teach who dont wannabe taught, my puns leave you shitless an distraught You couldnt even serve while practicin your hobby on the court!* I always thought you was a cool cat, so i decided ''Yeah, i'll school-the-whack' Dedicated a track too London, .............but you didnt mention its ya own religion that did the attack!** With one one slap, I'll snap ya back, lookin like your dancin the Limbo This kids so dumb...He went too fisher price for his first pair of Timbos!*** lemme show you how a win-goes, few puns, I chew bums like you c'mon dog, you gotta love me, even ya profile says your reppin my old crew!**** Explanations: *=On his msn profile it says his intrest is tennis lol, you serve in tennis lol. an the opening line was because he was in the elevation crew first floor **=he did that dedication track to the people in london, an he's a muslim (according to his msn profile lol) ***=timbos are timbalands, just clear that up in case some people didnt know ****=on his profile on rv, his crew says ''R.A.W'' lol Uppin this, an if you dont understand any of the verses, simply dont vote. Good luck inter.
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08-19-05, 12:01 PM | #6 |
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IP: 22E5 DE19
Voted For: Intermental
ok..lets brake this down........... inter: flowed well........ some nice punches....could be harder structure...lines were little streched.... some of them have more words and that makes linesdifferent lenght.... metafo: some hard punches.... flow wasnt as gd as inters..... u had some different lenght ines too.... lol...some funny punches....... overal:both of u did well......but i give this 1 for inter.... ..............no hate.......... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-19-05, 12:16 PM | #7 |
Coming to Kill you All
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This was feedback posted for Intermental
IP: F940 2708
checkin polls
but intermental...wtf up wit yo structure? stop with the hypens,startin every word wit a capital,the dots,and this(/). |
08-19-05, 12:17 PM | #8 | |
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IP: EE42 3313
sorry if its misleadin i was readin a thread sayin "HOW TO MAKE U A BETTER BATTLER" and took tips, so i implented it into my newst battle.........
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08-19-05, 03:29 PM | #9 |
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IP: A181 D033
Voted For: MeTaFo'
Inter's verse Silly Faggot' Dicks-Are-For- Chicks', Fuck-Ya'-Verse, It's Time To -Deflower- This Trick'... Like A To-Be-Continued-Movie', It's Time I Put An Ending -To -This'.. ^^^alrite opener, coulda been better though^^^ Can't Think Of Lines' To Defend- Yourself - With',{Damn}..../ Give Me Ya' Diss-Verse Before You Dis-Perse And I'll Write Da' Ending- To-It..../ : ^^^yeah i liked that punch but the first line let it down Got your knees shakin' when my-rhymes-rattle-ya-balance-like-gats.../ I awaken wastin-my-time-battlin'-talentless-cats... ^^^sorry fam that line had no effect you ain't even fit - to- lick' my shoes, your rhymes are- lower- class like a backwards digestive system, you get Fed-UP your ass ^^^funny, but somewhat confusing closer Metafo's verse Cant teach who dont wannabe taught, my puns leave you shitless an distraught You couldnt even serve while practicin your hobby on the court!* ^^^lol nice opener. nice personal I always thought you was a cool cat, so i decided ''Yeah, i'll school-the-whack' Dedicated a track too London, .............but you didnt mention its ya own religion that did the attack!** ^^^ohhhhhhhhh shit that had to hurt...daymn With one one slap, I'll snap ya back, lookin like your dancin the Limbo This kids so dumb...He went too fisher price for his first pair of Timbos!*** ^^^nuthin special....plain 1st line self glorification and 2nd line weak diss lemme show you how a win-goes, few puns, I chew bums like you c'mon dog, you gotta love me, even ya profile says your reppin my old crew!**** ^^^funny closer Look no hate whatsoever cos intermentals my dawg but i just thought Meta came really hard against him in this one....and the was nothin enough to hit back at him...... no hate.... v/MeTaFo' ~peace~ |
08-19-05, 04:30 PM | #10 |
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This was feedback posted for Intermental
IP: 3240 794D
pollz.............................................
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08-19-05, 10:53 PM | #11 | |
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IP: 05EC 5CF4
uppppppin......................................... ........
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08-19-05, 11:11 PM | #13 | |
got u all confused n shit
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This was feedback posted for Intermental
IP: 221E 9DCB
checkin polls for fam...............................
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08-20-05, 10:34 AM | #14 | |
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IP: 8B5E 0797
upppin............................................ ...
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08-21-05, 03:59 PM | #15 |
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: C066 0E25
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