3 VERSES -each diverse different approach ......HOT BEAT
did this about a month and a 1/2 ago no real direction for it

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links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218350
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217250

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TONY SELF TRACK EXCLUSIVE


yea


Aiyo Tony...ur flow is always nice...and ur delivery is normally good. But, I'd like to hear you manipulate your voice more. I know it's probably tough with a deep voice. But, Biggie Smalls has a deep voice and he was very expressive with his delivery.

With that said, the beat is pretty coo here...


Wassup with a hook?...Your verse ended and there was nothing but the beat playing in the background.


dawg...u need hooks or somethin over the breaks


the third verse almost sounded experimental


This was solid because there wasn't anything major either way...But, as a "song" it was lacking.


RTF please

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218805

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yea this wasn t for anything special just one of those wanted to spit bored days found a beat and let it ride goos looks fam

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beat is dope...has an arabian feel at the beginin..quality is aiite..u come in nice..got great delivery and i like how u sweitch up the flow...flow is nice..riding the beat really nice...lyrics are nice...im def feelin it....def rlly hot..u stopped rapping?...i think u cud put a hook into it..or talk in it...2nd verse..is good as first lyrics are str8..flow is crazy...u and q have different flows but i think both of u are both two of the best here...well rlly out of most netcees...third verse..flow again def doesnt fall up..this a nice song to listen to...something ill download..deffo..holla back..1

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That beat is off the chain.. For real.

for real.. all three verses was hot man... for real.. third verse sounded like a long chorus lol.. but it was off the chain man.. for reall.. all you need is a chorus son.. and you got yaself a ill song..


droppin bars like cell blocks...........all day.

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good looks on the feedback

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Aight...the beat is nice...flow and delivery are pretty nice...first time hearing ya i think voice sounds original...lyrics are str8...you need a hook on this...second verse is coo delivery is abit different...[Insert hook here->] [/Hook] lol j/p anyway third verse is nice to lyrics still nice...this would be a dope track if you laid down a hook on it...quality is decnt over-all nice ish man keep it up.

-uNo-

good looks on the feed damn imma have to make a hook now lol

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peepin...


damn... that beat is krazy.... whered you get that?????


anyways..... i might have to DL this and fill in the empty spaces... this beat is krazy... 1st verse you regular flow.... 2nd verse... i notice the diffrence ... i like this... delivery is more hood.... more radio like... dope... lol...
3rd verse... more multi like... flow crazy here... LMAO @ the ending... That scream is krazy!!!!!

I like this track... you went off and did yo thing thing.... werd ... gotta experiment sometimes... but you showcased some diffrent styles here ... which was coo... you know... little lyrical exercise aint never hert no body....


solid drop fam


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