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11-04-03, 06:29 PM | #1 | ||||||
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the time before you is all
the time you got and theres nothing between that believe it or not i work twelve hours and i just slept for three theres nothing to say in these things at least not for me so i wake up and i decide that this day does not matter should i go to work or write a poem i decided on the latter i write this poem, can you believe it came straight from the heart though its not for me, i wrote it to have you tear it apart so please dont tell me that this poem is at all good or leave any good responses as you normally would we all need someone to lean on this time make it me i wrote this today for all you to take out your animosity |
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11-05-03, 10:30 AM | #2 | |||||||
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11-05-03, 04:02 PM | #3 | ||||||
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catch i go through the same thing everyday. go to school, then work. go home and sleep for a few hours and restart it all over again. good drop. keep it up.
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11-06-03, 02:08 PM | #4 | |||||||
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this here seemed like a piece that comes out when you have writers block and decide to play with it some. You took an your everyday, and started our there and built on to it. made some good comments, and kept it together. And yeah thats always the way to right, straight from the heart!
~Tera~ DONT HATE
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