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Nitrogen | 3 | 100.00% | |
Yung MEDIkated | 0 | 0% | |
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07-15-08, 11:44 PM | #1 | |
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Nitrogen vs Yung MEDIkated
IP: 46DC DA3A
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UNLIMITED Lines No crew votes No Recycling No Biting no getting off topic Topic: defining Illness Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-18-08 at 11:44 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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07-18-08, 10:15 AM | #2 | |
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IP: 856E BCD8
Nitrogen has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-18-08 10:15 AM.
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07-18-08, 09:40 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 46DC DA3A
Yung MEDIkated has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-18-08 09:40 PM.
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07-21-08, 09:14 AM | #4 |
Light Weight
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IP: 295A BE34
the verse was basically typed up in 30 min. lol im normally not up yet, i wouldve gotten a no show if i waited to get up till my normal time. i forgot it was due today
The Definition of Ill Part 1: I'm Ill Part 2: The Illest of Artforms theres no way to define illness without really demonstrating what ill is see a verse could never truley be considered ill unless the content it conceals is for instance, i could say im the illest and baddest when speaking but i couldnt boast a strong case unless my bars were actually weakened so every now and then youll se my punchlines start gaggin and wheezin hemorrhaging on my open mics, drastically bleeding why you think the two illest ever lyrically is deceases and done and i aint talkin Biggie and Pac, im talkin Big L and Pun why the fuck you think niggaz say they spit fire? there verses is burnin they metaphors caught STD's and spreaded it to the rest of the wording so i might finally claim to be the illest, when im old and on my deathbed drop an open mic on rv and get feedback from ya kids kids my juices been flowin lately, which means im more deadly than ever a migrain during a writting session could cause me to put fourth my deadliest effort im past ill, ive reached mutant status, not a villain nor hero past Xavier and Jean Grey im on the level of cerebro the origin of my power? thats a question that needs no answer one of the illest of cats, whos lyrics is sparked by cerebral cancer the inflictions i suffer from allows me to display an exibition of skill so i ask, could these same reasons make me the definition of ill? nah see the definition of ill could be found in any illmatic quote any busta rhymes throwback or any words Em ever spoke but me, i was drawn into hip hop the first time i saw krush groove hearing the LL freestyle or watching the fat boys bust moves now tell me those wasnt the days when the music was illest back when it wasnt influenced by killers and the movement was realeast so i guess the defenition of ill is the birth of a nation now we the illest thing walking this earth, its like mad cow when the bass hit so we're renowned as hip hop junkies because we fiend fo the music like, "I'm ill, i need another hit of that, please bring me the music so i guess you can say being ill's having the hunger for more i guess thats why half of the rappers make me sick, and the illest ones is the cure and still finished wit an hour left
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07-21-08, 07:51 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 46DC DA3A
destroying and breaking the shackles a of unequality
by taking the quality of words and giving them a power so undestructable that they immobilize and shut down the operations of a hostile nation where uncilivilized becomes civilization peotry and arts becomes a foundation and the microphone becomes a weapon no ammo or bullets required just voices that penetrate and break the hearts of liers the suppliers of death or the government is what they are known as best but those with a mic are the givers of life the flickers of light.....in a world of darkness we create a world thats flawless where humans (got soul?) that (re-evolution"ize") the people as a wholewhich leaves the world of chaos at a stillness...... Freedom of speech....... ......the definition of illness
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07-21-08, 11:34 PM | #6 | |
Thank You, Come Again
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IP: 4E8C 6C2D
Voted For: Nitrogen
v/ Nitrogen easy. Young it still seems like your trying to battle.. or rhhyme to a crowd at 106 and park. Topicals is more about self reflection. Its an intellectual not combative aspect of battling. Keep on working though. Nice drop nittttt
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07-22-08, 11:20 AM | #7 |
Hell yeah
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This was feedback posted for Nitrogen
IP: 56DB FD7C
checkin the polls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.................
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07-26-08, 06:00 PM | #8 | |
Out-Spoken
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This was feedback posted for Yung MEDIkated
IP: AA7B EBA8
best shit i've seen from you yung...keep workin...i didn't think you had any potential.
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07-29-08, 09:17 AM | #9 | ||
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This was feedback posted for Nitrogen
IP: 611A A12A
speechless...puro dopeness amigo. word the fuck up. BOOST THE MUTHAFUCKIN' CRHYME RATE!!! the super, c.s.
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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08-08-08, 08:49 AM | #10 | ||
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IP: 61C0 7C7E
^^^bumping for my crhymie nitro...
...the super, c.s.
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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08-11-08, 07:28 AM | #11 | |
I made it and il end it
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IP: CAB7 929E
Voted For: Nitrogen
I see sum elevation from you yung but you still have a way to go yet.Nitrogen you won this by wordplay, better thought out + generally better put together piece. V- nitrogen |
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08-11-08, 09:28 AM | #12 | ||
~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: 61C0 7C7E
^^^bumping for my crhymie nitro...
...the super, c.s.
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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08-13-08, 08:41 AM | #13 |
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V/ nitro.
MED- you seem to not even write a topical yes it rhymed but it seemed like you was battling and thats not what topicals are about... you need to research some topicals or something man so you know whats going on.
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02-08-11, 03:50 AM | #14 | |
dope
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IP: 5659 BD1B
Voted For: Nitrogen
damn this verse ko'd it i really like how the punchlines connected and the wordplay was good the other verse by med wasnt stretched out enough.. i just think this verse hit harder and was more pleasent to read but both good verses... but i'll vote for this. |
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