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Check in by: 02-13-05 at 02:12 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

I.L. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-13-05 01:43 AM.

ub2ez has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-13-05 01:43 AM.

Man i'm Grammitical,so weak why i spit at you,you pit-i-ful
I was glad when A.I. got rid-of-u,my writin straight shit-on-u

So Listen Geek, I'll Inflict Your Speech, Have Ya Bitches Face Like Prison Meat

Cuz My Dick Long Hard Pipe Give Ya Braces And Fixs Ya Teeth

Ya Punches arent Connectin cuz Mark 'Forces Mettaphors' Worst than a Star Wars Lesson

Ya Fake and Spittin Fiction I'll Blow Out Ya Steady Star' and Really Kill the Marked Shins


Trust Nerves ya Body should Know ya Worthless Tissue is Just Something That Nobody Nose

Ya Rhymes Dont Flow Ya Frequency-Marks Dont count 9X Like 50Cent-Radios...

Herb Rape..This shit is Cold Remarkably u sucks at Ballin and Always Cooked in Bowls(herb football)

Fill ya Corpse With Holes Schools gone Take out Marks like Elementary Drawin Contro


k did it real quick...lets see what he got

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Your 0-1, without a doubt, you'll never be known in this world
Damn right you slap a bitch,no wonder you fight like a girl
Cut it straight to the facts and see you rappin is a sin
Shit I've gotten more referrals than you'll ever get wins
Team spirit? Effort? Nah theres barely nothin yah left with
Damn man, the only 100% you give us is your loss percentage!
Ground zero is wack dog, its manslaughter in this shit now dont shout
His crew name just mixes where he ends up against me and his vote count

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Voted For: ub2ez


HeadAche
Seems Like You Put Effort In Your Verse, You had Nice Punches here, Your Vocabulary Was There, Personals Pretty Decent Man, I Liked Your Structure Word, Jsut like Me Almost Man Nice, You Killed This Battle With Your WordPlay Man That Was Hell Of Dope, You Also Had Meta's Here, You Got Plain On The Target And Didn't Waist No Lines On Self Glory...9/10

I.L.
You Was Alright Man Kind Of Decent I Wasn't Digging Your Vocabulary Though, You Had Some Basic Ish Here Man, And Also You had Some Basic Punches That i Wasn't Feeling You Self Gloried A Couple Lines, Your Personals Not Really Working Hommie Try And Work On That Ish As Wel lAs Vocabulary It'll Be Better, Also Your Structure Was Decent Good Verse Both

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Voted For: I.L.

L.I.
Your 0-1, without a doubt, you'll never be known in this world
Damn right you slap a bitch,no wonder you fight like a girl
lol
Cut it straight to the facts and see you rappin is a sin
Shit I've gotten more referrals than you'll ever get wins
nah
Team spirit? Effort? Nah theres barely nothin yah left with
Damn man, the only 100% you give us is your loss percentage!
nice
Ground zero is wack dog, its manslaughter in this shit now dont shout
His crew name just mixes where he ends up against me and his vote count
no

Nice verse... the percentage thing was nice. Rest were decent. Decent verse.

Man i'm Grammitical,so weak why i spit at you,you pit-i-ful
I was glad when A.I. got rid-of-u,my writin straight shit-on-u
this was self glorification
So Listen Geek, I'll Inflict Your Speech, Have Ya Bitches Face Like Prison Meat

Cuz My Dick Long Hard Pipe Give Ya Braces And Fixs Ya Teeth
again, this was self g. and you've fucked the structure this the space inbetween both lines
Ya Punches arent Connectin cuz Mark 'Forces Mettaphors' Worst than a Star Wars Lesson

Ya Fake and Spittin Fiction I'll Blow Out Ya Steady Star' and Really Kill the Marked Shins
self g.
Trust Nerves ya Body should Know ya Worthless Tissue is Just Something That Nobody Nose

Ya Rhymes Dont Flow Ya Frequency-Marks Dont count 9X Like 50Cent-Radios...
no
Herb Rape..This shit is Cold Remarkably u sucks at Ballin and Always Cooked in Bowls(herb football)

Fill ya Corpse With Holes Schools gone Take out Marks like Elementary Drawin Contro
this was wack

This verse had too much self glorification. How do you expect to win with no disses? Also, i'd get rid of the gap. It's annoying. Gotta give this to L.I.

v/ L.I.

p.s. that little movie in ur sig is dope. lmao

Voted For: I.L.

i give this ta IL since his shit was more creative...structure was good from IL..headeache ya verse was kinda stretch in some places....punches hit decent in this battle...flow was kinda lackin i should say..wordplay coulda been better but itz w/e...vocab was in pretty good use...personals was OK from IL side of da field....

Opener-IL
Structure-IL
Personals-IL
FLOW-BOTH
WORDPLAY-BOTH
PUNCHES-IL
VOCAB-BOTH
CLOSER-none...

v/I.L...no hate ta yeah headache just thought ya didnt do that much better than him...

return da favor..link in sig...

Voted For: I.L.

ehh, my vote goes 2 L.I. l.i., ur structure wuz alot better then hiz. ur flow wuz alot better then hiz. u had sum aight punches, and they were better then hiz. Infector Mindz, maaaaaaan, ur structure wuz FUCKED, and ur lines were really stretched. sum of tha time i had a hard time figuring out wut rymed wif wut. no hate Infector Mindz. just werk on yo structure, how long ur lines are, and i wuzznt really feelin ur punches, so try n werk on them 2. werd

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Voted For: I.L.

I.L. - your flow was pretty decent, you had some nice punches my favorite one was your opener...it had nice wordplay too...your second bar was pretty dope too, never saw anyone talk about referrals in a battle before, nice creativity...and your third was dope too...good job attackin his losses...nice battle

Infector Mindz - your flow and structure weren't very good, i recommend that you dont put those space in there anymore...your punches were pretty weak and not very memorable...your vocab was actually pretty decent..but ur punches gotta hit harder, and get rid of the spaces...keep spittin

V/ I.L.

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