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12-15-05, 11:41 PM | #1 | ||||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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Fuck The Industry (DOPE SHIT)
IP: 12E7 3621
yeah man dopest song i've ever done imo
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3218871 listen too it and leave feed and i'll rtf on wat ever track but DROP A LINK Links ------ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217215 ==== http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217199 |
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12-16-05, 12:23 AM | #2 | ||||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
upppin in this bitchhh
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12-16-05, 12:36 AM | #3 | |||
OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
liked the theme
voice/quality are good flow is good most of the way through Ur DUBs are panned far left and right...lemme suggest that u pan them only 25 left and right...see how that sounds... ur hook fits the theme of the track, but could be more catchy not a bad track homie 1 |
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12-16-05, 12:44 AM | #4 | ||||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
thanks for the feed fam
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12-16-05, 02:25 PM | #6 | ||||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: D184 BF12
alright good looks uppin this biotch
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12-16-05, 02:31 PM | #7 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: 356E B92B
Aight
Beats Dope..... Hooks Nice Deliverys Dope FLows Different But I Like It,On Point Emtions Koo I Like Your Voice Lyircs Are Nice Presence Is Koo Hook Again Lol 2nd verse Same As Above Really LIke THe Outro Panning Fade Out Its Koo Rtf herwe Plz:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217290
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12-16-05, 02:37 PM | #8 | ||||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: D184 BF12
aight i'll do it all when i get home tonight i'm at school
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12-16-05, 03:29 PM | #9 | |||||
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IP: 079C 0756
always loved this beat nice underground ish...flow and delivery are nice...lyrics are coo...the hook fits the beat pretty good...quality is decent...second verse is coo...over-all hot shit man keep it up.
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12-16-05, 04:00 PM | #10 | ||||
GG Haterz
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IP: 547C A1D4
Concept isn't that original, but your flow is nice. 1st lyrics are pretty good. I don't think the beat was the right choice, however. Hook isn't that catchy, but it's ok. Ended too soon in my opinion, but overall I liked it. If you voice was a little louder over the beat I would probably bump this in my car.
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