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D.O.I. Anthem
IP: ED36 AAFF
D.O.I. Anthem
High Class D.O.I's drastic, crackin heads, Leavin bitches laughen Flows extatic, Rhymes always attracten addicts Hit the mic with passion, and leave with the right fashion Seat belts fasend, Ready to watch beef start crashin We ecquizit, Vicious but yet delicous while we rip this Cowards die slow, Bitches proved wrong and pre-written High Class will by-pass, bash and relaxe Anyone who hates on D.O.I, watch this anthrax take impact We stay straped with Open Mic and Battle Offers Pay no mind to pussies, and free-post droppers So lets be realistic, D.O.I ganna flip the game and twist-it Relentless flows, Vocab and Collabs seem to be mystik Beef's endless, neva comeing sense-less Just know we hold it down, other's left pimp-less My boy Whitelightning is quite frightning, making slow jams go exciting Envy Forever writing, forever lyrically Fighting Everyone in our crew is Ill, and was Born To Kill Simply taken Crews down from Big Macks to happy meals YJ lyrically blessed, you can call us soldiers at war uncontrollable, knock'n over barriers and doors My name might be J but we all High Class we immortals spit'n whitelightning controlling the mass most cats play off envy's name like why should i envy ya skillz you're makin remixes while we makin plenty of mills I'll swallow you whole, like an Anaconda even though they don't exist in Uganda (my country) come at me weak, I'm a blaze ya azz like a cigarette put a pillow on this crew n we'll be a bigger threat not even Webster can understand the definition of illness Lyrikal Konceptz delivering tha lyrics off tha realness Murderouz Methods and Mic Crashers will make ya feel this frozen hard package that D.O.I's about to drop hittin ya'll harder repeatedly we won't stop Explicit its D.O.I the indispicable, invincibles, lyrical individuals most highly critical, literal lyricals, walking miracles D.O.I the typical...lyrical rappin criminals text killas that spit angelical lyrical rituals always are orginal and not miserable fictional syllables, from sumbliminal emmbazzels my oral thesis ignites telekenisis Our mic's strikes like thunder leaving other decieased in the streets, resting in piecies in peace behold our flows show wack rap destinction to species lower than fecies, committing treason leaving ya'll 6ft deep no longer breathin TAG New crew on the block, get ready to get killed Cause were diverse in out rhymes and we all spit ill Murderouz Methodz will battle and merk any muthafucka alive And Lyrikal Konceptz will spit on topic, ya know they'll be tight We're doper than you and we're still elevatin Not well known yet, but all that will be changin We're outta our cage spitten rhymes in a rage You know ya get chills when we step up to da stage Talented cats,we be merking newbies for fun and when the vets step up they get shot down by our lyrical gun It's in our blood, we flow nicer than a steady stream of water If ya wanna add a loss to your record then jus give us a holler Like a blind man with a gun, Beat us? You got no shot We'll KO ya easily even if ya bring all ya got Reppin this crew yo I know yall be feelin this We up and commin fast, we are the Definition of Illness 007 D.O.I be the pirates, and we found the treasure lyrical herb killer, disfigure emcees for pleasure no need to be bitin lines, even for second measure even if you are the tightest, we still handle the pressure test us to the fullest, we already kidnapped the teacher snipe emcees the quickest, the illogical rap preacher all my life i been a sinner, i bin called the anti christ we’re hell raisers, whilst you got a nice suburban life using the tip of our pencil, all it takes to educate the masses you couldnt our point if you wore telescopic glasses our pre-emptive predictions is we see you in a closed casket like superman leave ya like a vegetable, in a basket we always ahead of the time, like my watch is fast spittin rhymes equal to crimes, leave ya name in the past Bash Ya all gon be Rollin in Ya Grave, like dead X-fiends In fared Beams Hit You While You Sleep, Givin You Wet Dreams Konceptz Manipulating Ya Rep,Smerin Ya Blood Ya Known To Be A Prep Dressin Like A Thug Verbal Internal Hits, Im Tearin Cats To Bits Like Computer Chips,But Unlike OJ The Glove Fits Ridiculous I Spit A Composition, Opposition Leave Ya Body Eroding Decomposition Gotta Proposition , Miscellaneous Missions For Millions, Massive Missile's Launch Find Crews You be Missing In Action, We Will Impair Ya Vision, With Different Laysik Sessions Flexin Multi Impression Aggression Im Impressive So Kneel On My Throne On The Phone Were Prones Come To Yield All the Crews Like black Tie Be Anticipating Our Movements Like Chess Berreta Progress To Slain And Aim and put a bullet right threw Ya Chest My Existance I Expand Reverse Ya Plans, I Got Every Emcee's Life In My Hand Lyricaly Tease Wit My Prestigious Flow,Knock Ya Brain On Ya Toes So Ya Can Think Wit Ya Feet Get Defeat Your Heat, I Cease With Ease Rip Ya Heart In Two and Say There's Ya Peace (Piece) Incisions Split Ya Spleen and Spine Rb's Top Five Banned Or Online Representing D.O.I EnVy SKiLLZ We are the definition of illness!! We the fishermen and the rest is just bate The chances of you beating us..well..that’s like sayin Elton john’s straight Our rhymes are electrifying...they putting out volts like wall sockets They bringin the heat, you couldn’t compete if you was strapped to a rocket Our rhymes will light ya text up, burn em to pieces...there hotter than a flare Your crews chance of beatin us is like sayin R-Kelly’s opening up a day care Challenge us!!! Please...to make a long story short you gonna get clapped D.O.I. will slice ya up...split ya apart like a dudes lips when they chapped We frighten cats...it don’t gotta be cold outside and we still givin em chills Definition of illness bitches, we born with it, this shit don’t come in a pill Spittin so crazy you scared to look...dropin ill verses literally makin ya sick Pieces up paper easily get shreaded...just like you when u get ripped Like bubble gum we’ll chew you up and blow ya to bits, DOI leavin nothing left son EnVy SKiLLZ commin for all ya bitches...take some good advice and Run
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12-04-03, 10:12 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: ED36 AAFF
uppin for feedback...
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12-05-03, 02:28 AM | #3 | ||||
Word.
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You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed/deleted...
But this was pretty good, a long read but it was worth it i thought...all of you had good flow i thought....some of you need to work on your structure though, lines were at all different lengths and some of you had kinda stretched out lines...mostly everyones vocab was good in this i thought....but overall this was a good piece...keep at it. |
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12-05-03, 08:50 AM | #4 | ||||
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word. reply to three other open mics, and post links to the threads your replied to, or this gets deleted.
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12-05-03, 08:59 AM | #5 | |||||||
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think this made for a good read.......but was too long......liked the different styles.....think you'll find some wont bother replying when they see the length...cos i almost didn't... but i did cos i know what its like.... i did a few like that and they jus got slept on...now i only do bout 3 ppl in a collab.....pZ.....
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12-05-03, 10:41 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 54F1 AB26
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1.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3573#post963573 2.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96634 3.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95155 Last edited by ....BaSh.... : 12-05-03 at 10:44 AM. |
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12-05-03, 12:10 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 3789 6BDE
thanx 4 da feedbac uppin!
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12-05-03, 02:16 PM | #8 | ||||
\/ pissing me off!!!!
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im still waitin for LM to come into the thread and ask about his chorus missin. lol.. nah that shit is fucked up though.
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12-07-03, 01:27 PM | #9 | |||||||
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Upping
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12-07-03, 01:56 PM | #10 | ||||||
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of course it was good shit
nothin less from Envy's crew explicit did say "lyrical" about 42 times its cool do, keep it up yall .................................................. |
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12-07-03, 02:11 PM | #11 | ||||||
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This was mediocre.. Nothing special.. Like I was expecting some wordplay or something in a track like this.. But it was good nonetheless.. Like I mean it was okay to read once.. Pz.. I didn't even read it all.. Just like 1/2.. It got really quite boring..
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12-25-03, 03:58 PM | #12 | |||||
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IP: 972E 0E8B
damn...lol
all those cats are gone now lol im the only person left in DOI in that anthem Except for Explict lol and yea freebase...
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