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lyrical clarity 0 0%
Ill-Grammatix 5 100.00%
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Old 04-19-05, 03:45 PM   #1
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lyrical clarity vs Ill-Grammatix

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loser pays 100,000 RV ... if ya ain't got it just consider yaself bankrupt

Loser never posts in the Diss the Person Thread ever again... you make the thread wack anyway so we won't miss you

250 posts to vote... everything else i'm leaving alone
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Take as much time as you need... you gonna need it... i'm giving you 3 days to drop... i'll most likely drop NLT tomorrow... i should just make it a banishment match...lol...you suck, son!

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Old 04-19-05, 03:45 PM   #2
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Ill-Grammatix has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-19-05 03:45 PM.
 
Old 04-19-05, 04:22 PM   #3
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lyrical clarity has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-19-05 04:22 PM.
 
Old 04-19-05, 06:56 PM   #4
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Boston’s in the building…
Straight fire out da bean…clarification for dis herb………

Bitch the only time you in Brooklyn is to put ya tongue under a Flatbush…
Don’t push, ya brain get mushed, in the service cause U.S girls wont give you puss…
Faggot ass you like dudes underneath you, that’s why ya avatar on a bunk bead…
Military haircut all over for a razor cut edge, so dicks can clearly see ya ass un-wedge.
Take ya items in ya inventory to make you come out and spit like a man…
But wanted to start off like wrestlers and clinch arms and hands….
Lyrical clarity…only name you done said lately through all ya post...
Commin at me is dangerous at all times like the weather on the Florida coast.
With intent of envious resentment I implement a content non resistant…
Even with your vicious persistence with minimal intenseness your scheme is senseless.
Clarify the clarity which you cannot possible accomplish a victory…
Steroids put ya biceps in business because of your masturbation trickery…
Everybody done pissed on you that are why ya name covered in yellow….
You cant even stand next to me son you don’t roc a tall enough stiletto…
You a bitch wit ya Flintstones raps daughter of Wilma nickname pebble…
Playing star wars on Xbox would be the way for you to become a rebel…
Even B.I.G is telling you to wait, stop; to the left of ya verse…
After this you will remain up like the sides on converse…
I give you dealth, after I conceal ya last breath, while you mumble whats left…
4 you no one wepts, Your done like women with non treatable cancerous breast…
Your corpse is now a statue in remorse of a mc Donald’s menu………
You will be pissed like customers if their fries were discontinued….
Your conception of me was misdirected by your ego of me vs. you….
If I don’t win now I will later like death in final destination 2
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Old 04-20-05, 03:34 PM   #5
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bring the heat.... and if i lose ya still get the 100,000... you just gimme ya 500 or whatever it is you got saved up...lol... remember...the loser never posts in DTP ever again... don't take it to heart... it's the net... i do this for fun... but i'm serious about my rhymes and kats who wanna challenge me... stay up....lol...

ps... take ya "L" like a man
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Old 04-21-05, 01:32 PM   #6
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yo this kidd is a phony man...........i dropped on the first day all off the top..........he pre written taken three dayz kidd..............thats bad bisness gramatix and you talkin madd crazy like ya skillz is bullet proff son..ya rap character is losing value pop'o..........1........
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Old 04-22-05, 10:42 AM   #7
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this kid talkin mad trash... even after i told him some family shyt came up and i ain't really been online... fuck you son... omma drop right now...
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Old 04-22-05, 11:19 AM   #8
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less shit talk... just walk the walk cuz frankly, kid, you starting to bore me
I'll let ya initials tell the tale... you in a L.ower C.ategory
A L.ow C.aliber L.ocal C.haracter with L.ittle C.redibilty... don't make me expose ya
(Born Loser) You L.ose C.ompetitions; I L.ose C.ontrol L.aughin' C.onstantly while yo' ass L.ose C.omposure
didn't accept the challenge the first time I told ya ass to raise up
get blazed up with punches that'll make ya shoulder blades touch
ain't much to diss the L.ittle C.oward... said he spit that off the top?
i think not... peep da link... it took him days for him to drop
so stop bullshittin the people..you could never be my equal
you said it the best... Lyrical Clarity... ya shyt is see-through!
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Old 04-22-05, 11:20 AM   #9
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less shit talk... just walk the walk cuz frankly, kid, you starting to bore me
I'll let ya initials tell the tale... you in a L.ower C.ategory
A L.ow C.aliber L.ocal C.haracter with L.ittle C.redibilty... don't make me expose ya
(Born Loser) You L.ose C.ompetitions; I L.ose C.ontrol L.aughin' C.onstantly while yo' ass L.ose C.omposure
didn't accept the challenge the first time I told ya ass to raise up
get blazed up with punches that'll make ya shoulder blades touch
ain't much to diss the L.ittle C.oward... said he spit that off the top?
i think not... peep da link... it took him days for him to drop
so stop bullshittin the people..you could never be my equal
you said it the best... Lyrical Clarity... ya shyt is see-through!
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Old 04-22-05, 11:21 AM   #10
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since you already posted there shouldn't be no bullshyt about me accidentally droppin in the comments spot... one
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Old 04-22-05, 11:34 AM   #11
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

LC:

Bitch the only time you in Brooklyn is to put ya tongue under a Flatbush…
Don’t push, ya brain get mushed, in the service cause U.S girls wont give you puss…
^^wack and stretched 1/10
Faggot ass you like dudes underneath you, that’s why ya avatar on a bunk bead…
Military haircut all over for a razor cut edge, so dicks can clearly see ya ass un-wedge.
^^wtf 1/10
Take ya items in ya inventory to make you come out and spit like a man…
But wanted to start off like wrestlers and clinch arms and hands….
^^decent 4/10
Lyrical clarity…only name you done said lately through all ya post...
Commin at me is dangerous at all times like the weather on the Florida coast.
^^good meta 6/10
With intent of envious resentment I implement a content non resistant…
Even with your vicious persistence with minimal intenseness your scheme is senseless.
^^multies made the bar wack you suck at them so stop using them 0/10
Clarify the clarity which you cannot possible accomplish a victory…
Steroids put ya biceps in business because of your masturbation trickery…
^^no 1/10
Everybody done pissed on you that are why ya name covered in yellow….
You cant even stand next to me son you don’t roc a tall enough stiletto…
^^lol 5/10
You a bitch wit ya Flintstones raps daughter of Wilma nickname pebble…
Playing star wars on Xbox would be the way for you to become a rebel…
^^ehh 4/10
Even B.I.G is telling you to wait, stop; to the left of ya verse…
After this you will remain up like the sides on converse…
^^decent 4/10
I give you dealth, after I conceal ya last breath, while you mumble whats left…
4 you no one wepts, Your done like women with non treatable cancerous breast…
^^again with the wack multies you cant do 0/10
Your corpse is now a statue in remorse of a mc Donald’s menu………
You will be pissed like customers if their fries were discontinued….
^^ehh 3/10
Your conception of me was misdirected by your ego of me vs. you….
If I don’t win now I will later like death in final destination 2
^^good meta 6/10

Overall: 35/120 (29%)

IG:

less shit talk... just walk the walk cuz frankly, kid, you starting to bore me
I'll let ya initials tell the tale... you in a L.ower C.ategory
^^nice nameplay 7/10
A L.ow C.aliber L.ocal C.haracter with L.ittle C.redibilty... don't make me expose ya
(Born Loser) You L.ose C.ompetitions; I L.ose C.ontrol L.aughin' C.onstantly while yo' ass L.ose C.omposure
^^original but stretched 4/10
didn't accept the challenge the first time I told ya ass to raise up
get blazed up with punches that'll make ya shoulder blades touch
^^nice 6/10
ain't much to diss the L.ittle C.oward... said he spit that off the top?
i think not... peep da link... it took him days for him to drop
^^ok 3/10
so stop bullshittin the people..you could never be my equal
you said it the best... Lyrical Clarity... ya shyt is see-through!
^^good closer 6/10

Overall: 26/50 (52%)

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Old 04-22-05, 06:07 PM   #12
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pretty good verse...best shyt i seen you drop so far... i give props when they due... even when i don't like somebody...lol... but we'll see how it ends soon enough...out
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Old 04-23-05, 03:40 AM   #13
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wow i wasn't expecting you to rip him after reading his verse....but his verse bored me like a lot of peoples verses....i laughed at yours it was funny, i like how you did the initial thing that was creative.....let's break it down like this sin ce i'm already talking about Ill right now we gonna keep on.....your punches were good hit hard....structure was no where near ass good as LC's but on audio you would be fine....your wordplay was good....your verse was just plain out hard that all there is to it

Now LC you had a tight verse....you tried puttin some multies in there but you should work on them.....you attacked him enough but your verse bored me....i dunno why it bored me like a lot of peoples verses do....don't get me wrong it was tight but it was boring no hate....your verse was decent in every category but Ill ripped you....
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Old 04-23-05, 01:52 PM   #14
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no doubt... uppin this... true...coulda did the structure thing but i was in a rush to get it done and didn't really proof it before i submitted it.....thanks for the feed....

post links and i'll vote on ya battles... don't matter who ya vote for in this one... i'll always RTF
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Old 04-24-05, 04:16 AM   #15
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