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07-12-05, 11:01 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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Reap The Wind
IP: ADBD 16C4
Tree's swifling around me, with my feets hitting the floor as I pant. Sun baring down on me. Sweat dripping, I think I'm going to faint I hear voices, and those voices that I'm trying to run away from My lips moves up and down, my heart beat as loud as drums Pant and Pant, fearing the outcome of an white mans hand on me Pant and pant, Shutter with nervousness thinking of the whip thee . . In my head, I can still hear the massive screams from my vocals God reamin deaf. No one can save us. Wings arent working on angels Broken out from the abyss tools. The chains, the whips, the lack of food We came on this earth expecting to hear cheers, but we hear boo's Hated by the different race. Feared by the physical action. The fist We seek in H20's most of us, adults, children, teenages drown in it . . Chains still jiggling on the ground. Dogs barking, growling behind me My stomach,shivers and teeters.... My heart beating un-controllably With a feel of relieve, Infront of me, bushes of branches start to disappear 'I'm almost there" The sun is coming closer "I'm almost out of here" I can smell the ocean, it feels like my nostrils has taste buds. I can taste it Excitements beams in me, As my foot touches the silk land of fishes . . Come back you N*****, The voices behind me said. with a mad feeling My heart is bright as the sun shining above me. I'm so happy Also sad. As the tears course down my cheeks, I think of the people. The people I left behind, who wished they can also escape the jungle Cheers, was my only present, and I'll cherish it in my memory Relaxed now, in this old boat. As I feel the slight breeze Quick key...leave feed and links to your OM OR POEMS...Yep.
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07-13-05, 02:13 AM
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199720
werd i was feeling this the vocab was nice structure was kool overall a strong piece, the topic of slavery.. which i think it was a good topic. you could turn this into a topical of some sorts with the rhyming.. but still very nice.. werd
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07-13-05, 06:56 AM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: ADBD 16C4
Thanx Uppin..........................................
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