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07-18-05, 06:42 PM
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a.k.a prozak
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Still Incomplete
IP: 865C 284C
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/straightaim_music.htm
yo this is a complete song its just called "incomplete" cuz im explainin how i didnt find my own style and how rap's dying, and other thangs...i didnt really tackle a topic straight on point but listen to this shit and leave feed and i'll RTF here's my links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=198954&page=3 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200371 |
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07-18-05, 06:45 PM
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a.k.a prozak
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IP: 865C 284C
oh and i warn u this is not a mix this me on the mic
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07-18-05, 08:27 PM
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 1CA5 73AB
I cant listen to this shit man...
Quality is fucking terrible
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07-18-05, 08:29 PM
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a.k.a prozak
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IP: 865C 284C
whateva punk fuck u it aint that bad
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07-18-05, 08:34 PM
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IP: 07A8 D079
quality is bad... ya flow is off too, it's like you not flowin but you talking over the beat, lyrics need to be upped. ya delivery is really boring too. keep workin at it, holla back.
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07-18-05, 11:15 PM
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a.k.a prozak
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IP: 865C 284C
thanx for the feed uppin...
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07-18-05, 11:41 PM
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 1CA5 73AB
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LMAO You got a problem, set up a battle, if not, shut the fuck up and fix your quality
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07-19-05, 01:20 AM
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IP: EA72 FF7D
ok....listening....
like the intro to the beat... beat is dope.... still gotta work on your flow...even though its gettin a lil bit better with every song you do.....some of the lyrics are coo...some i wasnt feelin...like the benchin line..... you mos def gotta work on mixing and getting the quality better....i cant tell if you have a hook...it all sounds like one big verse to be honest....which it may be....ok now i hear the hook...put some effects on the hook....to make it stand out some... just keep workin man
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07-19-05, 05:15 AM
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IP: 2029 97B3
overall its jus kinda boring to listen to..like they said..it sounds like ur jus talkin over the beat..ur flow is off..ur lyrics definitly need to be elevated..
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07-19-05, 10:38 AM
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IP: 0A3B 6737
BEAT IS DOPE...........
dogg..........its kinda hard to listen to this...........delivery needs a lot of work..... energy you know......... you could spit the same lyrics but if you come wit energy behind your words.... it would be dope..... for real...... sounds like you almost reading off the screen....... try to memorize your verse..... and you'll come iller over the beat you spitting to...... juss a lil advice........ lyrics is aight man fo real......... juss upp your energy and memorize your verse..... it takes time...... but you'll step your game up doggs...... stay up.......... keep dropping doggs i see you.........
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07-21-05, 12:39 AM
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IP: 865C 284C
thanx for the feedback dawg im still uppin on this shit
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07-21-05, 12:03 PM
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IP: 1ADC A69C
god damn...ur vocals are HIGH as shit
gave me a fucking migraine wtf hell no 1 |
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07-21-05, 06:39 PM
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a.k.a prozak
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IP: 865C 284C
lol that cuz i am as high as shit...
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07-21-05, 08:06 PM
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IP: B9A5 1BCE
Aight, your flow is so choppy it sounds like your talking with a rhythm. Beat is good, but your lyrics don't reflect the beat well. You said something then a gun went off, not even related. I couldn't listen to more then half of this, keep elevating. I won't play it again till you get your flow smoother.
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07-24-05, 08:44 PM
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a.k.a prozak
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IP: 865C 284C
the gun was coincidence....but i had ta have the beat...and ur right i have ta elevate but u dont have ta be so fuckin stuck up bout it
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