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07-14-04, 09:02 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Quit Hatin
IP: 117A 165A
My diss to those that think they are Dre and constatly claim they're at the top. You know who you are...
----------- I see many fools postin raps on the these forums Thinkin theys gansters but they only got me snorin its borin, battlin each other always out for glory your a whore g i dont care about your story or where you come from what ya clique ya with i've heard it all before bro ya spittin the same shit ya words might be different but the meanings the same your out for a name claimin your ahead of the game try to be original and think of something new think you'll get signed? speak shit is all you do raps all about diversity its constatly changin mixed up and rearrangin, whats that i hear ya pagin? I guess I just touched on something there bro Now ya gettin pissed off and wanna have a go But I roll with a different style all together aint sayin its worse and aint sayin its better Im down with the clown and Im down for my krown So don't piss me off man you know I aint soft I'm known to go off when people poke and prod So I read and see ya sayin nigga in every rap But I'm askin myself how many are actually black Think your fightin turff wars youd be shittin your drawers rollin the streets with your so called whores I've seen it all before and its a real tragidy Thats why i dont claim shit and expect respect for free You gotta earn that shit put ya beats on the floor Till your spittin so tight people askin for more You'll take many swings most are probably gonna miss and expect to be dissed but just raise up that fist Because I dont give a fuck bout what other gotta say This is a open mic forum so just let everyone play ) |
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07-14-04, 09:14 PM | #2 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 93AF 0EB2
i dont know if you talkin to me, them "other" negros or what, but regardless i'm feelin this shit so i give you yo props, alot of people on here claimin shit they aint. i try to spit truth as much as possible though so i feel you dawg, nice drop
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07-15-04, 01:59 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 117A 165A
*bump*
Do I suck? Do I have flow? What am I doin wrong? What am I doin right? Looking for some feed back please. As for the "Because I dont give a fuck bout what other gotta say" by that I mean I'm gonna keep rappin no matter how bad the critisim is, though I am willing to make changes heh so hit me with it. |
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07-15-04, 09:49 AM | #4 | |||||||
bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
its flowed pretty good except for the last part of your first verse u werent really rhyming at all..however you threw in good multies and exelent flow..sothe multies made ur flow beter
overall7/10 return the favor in my open mic..its in the sig
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07-15-04, 10:15 AM | #5 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 93AF 0EB2
you wanna know if you can flow, yea you can flow, your flow is nice, your vocab is decent and your structure is aight. i give it a 8/10, now go check my shit out on openmic and drop some feedback, u cant miss it its on the front page
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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me." -Young Buck |
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07-15-04, 11:29 AM | #6 | |||||
Light Weight
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IP: 4C49 64C6
yo it started wit good flow and continued but slacked towards he end, goodverse tho
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07-16-04, 02:47 AM | #7 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: EC0B 84C7
kewl song
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