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you have 30 mins to spit and i got another 30 after your 30

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No dk
No crew
No hate
No Swaying
No Fake Personals

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checkin in................................................ ..................................

Looser gets banned

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aiight checkin..i wasent on so both verses due by 10 pm eastern aiight...n dick rydin will be watched fo closly....

aiight checkin..i wasent on so both verses due by 10 pm eastern aiight...n dick rydin will be watched fo closly....

^ no i have 30 mins after you...................

and you have 30 mins from now................................

no fuckin 1 hour 30 mins..........................

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lmao ok fagit ill spit when im done...n jus let mah verse do tha talkin///////////////////////////////////////////////

^ its been one hour

hurry the fuck up................................................ ............................

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.Lyke *Recently Divorced Men* people soon to be Searching For Cel
Cause I Got *CD* on lock tighter than a expensive Stereo
Cant beat me so u *chasing Your Dreams*Literally Like Sleepwalkers
Kass’ll shove candy down ya throat, so u can try n be a Sweat-Talker
Jus drop mah verse n already this win is Forming
visibly his writtens are *Up To No Good* like *Satan In The Morning*!!
Lyke *retards wit sketches* , Cel *Shows No Trace Of Talent*
Cause I got Cel Searching For His Words More Than Awkward-Moments
Call me *B* cause Ill Be On Top of Your Eyes' like a *Red Sox Fitted*
U aint sik ya jus tha Common Cold lyke when a Veteran Spitted
Kid look Im on top of this Beef lyke a fuckin Seasoning Salt
K got this kid covering his face more than Super Hero faluts
Ya softer than the prayer of a desperate parent fo all ya Aliaes
Cause *Im quick ta serve Cell* like an *impatient-waitresses*
Say u hotten than me?? Mah verse will leave ya thoughts wit Bends
Cause tha day u win is tha day I can name Eveyone in Wits End(lmao)
K’ll let ya Head Rest Like The Definition Of Pillow Fight
N then ill have ya stomach on tha ground lyke Sleepin Bag nights!!
Cover This Dick like *men at dinner following Napkin Manners*
Cause ya Wit End, as I leave ya Face out of place lyke larger Banners
Smash in ya Face, n leave ya bones exposed though ya Jaw
I would diss all ya Aliaes, jus that kno1 knows who tha FUCK they R!!!(lmfao)

Cd is his names annisials
His title is a veteran, n a lot of vetenrans have colds n r sik
He has an Alias called “Divine Remedy” lmao
Lmao who tha fuck knows whos in his crew
Rolf…no1 knows his alias…lmao…

Woah aiight kid…lmao on tha real u might feal some pain after this…dont worry, cause even if u spit weak this verse will make this go to tha Fame...so jus try ya best lmao...

o ya n have ya verse in by Noon tommorw eastern time...dont miss tha date.............................................. ..............................

iight at the start I said no fake personals as a rule...so this doesn’t count as swaying...You broke the rule and so I can set it straight

[1] Celestal isn’t my alias..its my origional name

[2] Everyone knows who my alias’s are..i fuck around wit newbies on Divine remedy and I beat Chrit on Slik Shadow <-- everyone knows that

[3] Wits End is one of the dopest crews on RB...all known vets are in it...even including chrit who u claimed to be the best

Haha...

Now enough wit makin ya feel dumb though
Bout to rock ya fo jus thinkin Wits End aint dope

iight...

My textual specimen's the most excellent testament
you'll get dominated and fucked like an S&M specialist
I don't recommend testin this, frequent punches rip this mc
leave you slumped in misery, eating crumpets n sippin tea
tried ya chump shit dissin me, but only your e-half as tight
so you just fucked yourself like u a lonely hermaphrodite
gettin carrie'd, come up with a plan to survive the dance
cause you couldn't spit nice with Flanders saliva glands
yo behold the shittyness, quickest battle of the century
your rhymes is hideous, so put that in your parentheses
New to Rb, actin tuff but this newbies scared shitless
Ya wack..0-0 and you already got a fuckin win list
Obviously you cant read, 6 battles open at one time
I would report u to IR, but ill jus give u loss by my lines
Wit no proof or evidence, not belivin I beat Chrit
Well im that Shadow that killed him, bitch I am Slik
Not following my rules..outlaw! ha...u made the lines 15
Dumb fuck..everyone knows, newbie or vet...
...You rhyme 2 lines not 3

[- Explanations If You Don’t Know -]

“New to Rb, actin tuff but this newbies scared shitless
Ya wack..0-0 and you already got a fuckin win list”

^^ startin beef wit me and sayin he would murk me
^^ he is 0-0 so he hasn’t beat anyone, he lies and puts a win list

“Obviously you cant read, 6 battles open at one time
I would report u to IR, but ill jus give u loss by my lines’

^^ You are only aloud 2 battles open
^^ If I reported him to IR he would get dq’d

“Wit no proof or evidence, not belivin I beat Chrit
Well im that Shadow that killed him, bitch I am Slik”

^^ didn’t belive me when I told him I beat chrit
^^ My alias is Slik Shadow..who I beat chrit on

“Not following my rules..outlaw!..ha u made the lines 15
I think everyone knows, newbie or vet...
...You rhyme 2 lines not 3”

^^ We had made the rules 10 lines at the start..when he made the origional thread he made it 15..then it was fucked so we just re-did it
^^ U rhyme 2 lines together..wit 15 lines your forced to rhyme 3

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Envy Skills Kilt Him.....His Punches Were There.....Flow And Structure Was Great.....I Could Read It Easier Too...

Cass.....Yours Was Bout Average... Thats Not Enuf

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bad vote. it doesnt count. do it again & i'll dq you from ur battle too. -feeble

^^^^That Battles Closed.....Hit This Up....Please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103659


..........Thanks

Not Sure Where The Rhyme Is. Whack Opener

Good Punch. Nice Delivery.

Okay Punch.

Repeated "lyke" again..that's annoying. Alot of people deemed retards are actually brilliant artists. Don't follow that punch. Decent Red Sox Punch. Weak Last Punch.

Decent Punches. Back To Back. Nice Recovery.

Meh. Nothin' Special. Maybe Cause It's Convuluded.

What You Can't Read? Wits End Has Got Some High Profile Vets. Whack Punch. And The Whole "(lmao)" Shit. That's Whacker Than Whack.

Nice Combo. Again. Recovered Nicely From Your Shaky Past Lines.

Don't Understand.

Jaw and R...doesn't rhyme. Good Punches Though. Good Closer.


Well..This Was Wierd Verse. At One Moment You Had Dope Punches And Than It Was Whack Solid. Can't Play That Game In Pinkslips. And The Whole LMFAO, And LMAO throughout Was Upping The Whack Points. Don't Laugh At Your Own Punches, That's Retarded. This Doesn't Look Good Kid.



Dope Opener. Not Much Else To Say. Like A Mike Tyson 1st Round In His Prime.

Good Delivery Once Again.

LOL. Now That Was Entertaining.

Ouch. That Hurts.

<----What This Did To K

Okay Punch.

Decent Punch.

Nice.

No Rhyme. Horrible Closer.

Everyone Has Their Own Scheme.
This Was a lopsided battle. You weren't playing catch up and you did a good job of proving your record. Your Closer Sucked, need to work on that but you did good.

Celestal had a solid verse throughout and punches hit hard, shallow on the personal side but he packed way more punch. K hit up WEC and check out those tips so you have a solid verse and don't play catchup. Celestal..hit up WEC for instructions on a closer.

Vote: Celestal.

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UR A FAGIT ASS LIAR


iight at the start I said no fake personals as a rule...so this doesn’t count as swaying...You broke the rule and so I can set it straight......

Hmm ok first i never said Celetal was ur alias i said that u had one u idot...n thats not a fake personal cause u jus addmitted to havin 2 names idot...so that not fake..n stop tryin to sway...

[2] Everyone knows who my alias’s are..i fuck around wit newbies on Divine remedy and I beat Chrit on Slik Shadow <-- everyone knows that


Hmm ok that doesnt have to do wit shyt...i dont want to kno bout ur life...so y tha fuck u bringin that up??lmao


[3] Wits End is one of the dopest crews on RB...all known vets are in it...even including chrit who u claimed to be the best

Ok ur a fuckin retaded fagit...wow....Jus cause u think its one of tha dopest crew on this syte dont mean that i kno all tha members in it u fag....wow ur soooo gay, swayin votes n getttin people to dick ryde u wat a fagit....wow....n i also never said that chrit was tha best i said sopouslvy tha best....so fuck outta hurrr wit all ur gay dick rydin shyt.....




Lets See SOme Fake Personals u Swayin Herb^^

he is 0-0 so he hasn’t beat anyone, he lies and puts a win list

this was said by u, u fagit...Lets see i have a win list considerin that i got a fuckin ko u herb...thats y Feebel even said it in tha thread.....so hows that fo a fake personal u fagit asss nigga....


^^ didn’t belive me when I told him I beat chrit

WHo ever said i didnt belive u??damn kid ur soo gay...lmfao...wow u need to learn to read, i never said u didnt beat him u fagit ass...n there is another fake peorsonal....



FO ALLU FAGIT ASS DICK RYDERS

My textual specimen's the most excellent testament
you'll get dominated and fucked like an S&M specialist

Hmmm...a lil played, n basic...nuttin hard hitttin...basicly not even a punch...

I don't recommend testin this, frequent punches rip this mc
leave you slumped in misery, eating crumpets n sippin tea

Lmfao ok....???? this wasent even a punch...this was wak as fuck a waste or writin.,...

tried ya chump shit dissin me, but only your e-half as tight
so you just fucked yourself like u a lonely hermaphrodite

Wow lmfao...Need i say anymo i wont even bother to explain tha rest thats wak n weak not even a punch..nigga u gay


U DIckryder Swayin votes bitch

Lest recap this u swayed votes made shyt up got a dick ryde votes, n did everything u said in tha rules u cant do...nigga u a bitch u aint worth battling, ull jus get dirckrydes u fag...u aint shyt n ur verse was so wak wit no punches or werplay i wasent even gon botehr wit explain tha rest...so lets put it lyke this....ur gay n this shyt is done