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08-06-05, 03:19 PM | #1 | |||||
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The Essence.
IP: 9E2F CDE8
oblivious, society's views are powerfully corruptive, and wickedly captivating... but it's the one's who rise above, that are the truly gifted... ...The Essence... this session leads, leaving trails to my expressions exceeding the norm, with speed, i have fate in my possession the questions of life, dont answer on their own obsession and greed, lessons to weave so seeds of your soul will grow to full potential, expanding strong with the network but standing beyond those who have to suck dick to get work and to those who are demanding my dream ship cannot be landing free im more creative with this hiatus since you're all about profanity see, i bring the music with me, believing in ingenuity leaving rebels feeling distant for decieving continuity heaving grievances, perceiving naives, retrieving thieved truths seeing conceited youths, acheiving lute from pre-conceived routes to receive repute? i'll explain, settling for fake fame does not create you remaining true moves you closer than embezzling ever takes you im not meddling with the message, listen to whispers instead of shouts dont be selling yourself short, before you've begun to sprout but if you're one to doubt, clear it out from intuition let your mouth spout words used as lyrical ammunition you'll hear it from this magician, my vision changes wishes you'll be asking for the music, instead of booze or stage bitches and ditch the digits, put on my tunes and expand your mind unravel from views of time and travel to my land of rhymes where i mesmerize mankind, turning a blind eye to lies with my pride refined i dont look around for motivation..........i glance behind and i look around at these crooks of the game, i see them stressing while they come out with their same shit, i aim to leave you guessing but im only a small venue of blessing, so savor my presence because on my menu of music.....the flavour is essence ___________________________________________ feed.
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08-06-05, 03:22 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: A0C8 44A9
Fuckin' sick OM..
I'll leave better feed later, I'm gong mini golfing.. |
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08-06-05, 04:37 PM | #3 | |||
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IP: 3240 794D
Dope...the flow was there without a doubt, and this is really a masterpiece. Maddrapper might even call this rap, but more likely he'll post one of his own verses in here. The multis were well thought out, as well as the content and everything else. One of those pieces that I read a few times. Good job on this...
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08-06-05, 07:13 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
thank you.
upping.
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08-06-05, 07:30 PM | #5 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 0893 5074
This was some dope stuff right here.And....is that some multis I see?LOL...dope.
wording stayed on point throughout the whole verse.Vocabulary was extrodianary.Flow was smooth as ice.Nothing bad to say.10/10. |
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08-07-05, 12:44 PM | #6 | |||||
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
bump............
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08-07-05, 12:52 PM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 682E 2D32
Nice Ill Drop Feed Later
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08-07-05, 12:59 PM | #8 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: 6A3C A9FB
dope flow was sick good multis an aight vocab
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08-08-05, 11:09 AM | #9 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
good shit right here.
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08-09-05, 12:35 AM | #10 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
dope piece man....really liked it good emotion nicely flowed......excellent structure right here.....good multies man iight vocab.........8/10
Rtf on the links in my sig........1 |
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08-09-05, 12:28 PM | #11 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
i'll see what i can do.
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08-09-05, 01:46 PM | #12 | |||||
Guilty Of Chryme
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IP: 3240 794D
Fuckin Dope, Good job.. Your point really got thru in this piece, great flow.. multis were nyce.. Keep droppin' pieces like this, its enjoyable to read..
RTF, if you can- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203343 |
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08-12-05, 02:53 AM | #13 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
word...........
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08-13-05, 12:13 AM | #14 | |||||
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
lets get some feeeeeeeeeeeed
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08-13-05, 01:43 PM | #15 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 3240 794D
Nice flow, i was feelin this good topic.....nice vocab...everything was on point 8/10...kepp it up
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