Yes, I really did need to add that Socrates part in the title so I could get more feedback, lol. The first track is some shit I did for a collab with some idiot named Compose but decided to just leave my verse in since he never records, and the second track is some of my "deep" shit that I wrote like 5 months ago and recorded recently. Leave feedback for both if you want, but you only gotta do one.

www.myspace.com/logicspeaks
OR
www.soundclick.com/socratesakaphantom

Feedback:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2742256
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2742257

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Soundclick

bump.

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Soundclick

twelve quik bars track was aight ya flow sounded crisp rode the beat well toward the end sounded like a slight slip but nuthin major solid beat choice them easy ridah joints overall solid drop

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for the first track. I thought you had a solid flow on a nice beat. You have a nice quality, delivery was decent, your up for the most of it then you go down. Exactly like how you said in the song when you lose outta breathe but in other words your delivery went down. Your lyrics were tight and made me get into it more cause I like when cats have intense lyrics. overall your drop was tight.

for the song "threat" I like it, very tight and soft beat. You went with the ease laid back flow, pretty solid job with that. delivery was there, you do seem a bit tired but it's cool. You also wrote the deep lyrics here too, made me get into it. overall I think you did a nice job.

could you rtf here please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227959

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k..1st joint..beat is decent nothing great...ya quality alot better.....flow has gotten alot better too....delivery improved but still needs work tho...your dubs is really saving u but the lack of variation in ya tone still shows...u going wit the laidback style so delivery is HUGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!lyrics u had sum tight lines in there son..Soc still got them punches dats wassup...keep dat up.

track 2....intro was eh...awww..I always hated this beat...I believe Arkane right? the bass fucked the whole beat up...but onto the vocals....flow is a bit robotic...ya not really really catching the rhythm, you catching the snares....delivery needs more variation..if u had went btw a whispering tone an ya reg tone on this u would torn this shit..but vocally u pretty stayed in the same zone whichs hurts u on such an emotional beat cuz the beat is setting the emotional tone all u had to do was match it an ya didn't so thus the beat overpowers u, an carries u really...story was good but this is a case where the saying applies "is not what you say its---->how u say it" overall good song especially content wise it jus the other aspects but u clearly coming around..as I told u before its all about practice....gotta record everyday man or at least every other day........1

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