this is for all the cheating guys in my life

i asked for the truth you told me some lies. i dont even need to hear ur alibies...i know what the mean...i've heard them all before...but this time it means...ur ass is out the door....
you told me that you loved me...i thot it was true...you told me you loved me.. and i told you i loved u too...now i see it was all a game...a scheme to make me another number on ur list...on the list none of us have names...just numbers to show the order that u skrewed us over in....


sry y'all but thats it 4 now..more lataz

Seemed like a fairly quick 'freetype'. Straight forward. The bluntness gave it an quite bare emotion to it. Nothing too indepth. Just there. Which i liked. Though of course, the more one can relate, the more in depth it will seem. But you know what i mean..

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ty 4 da feedback...i'm working on it..this is only the 3rd thing i put on here

yes for a straight forward clear piece like this theres never much to say towards them, its a good way to get feelings out and to vent, and something that you dont spend all your time on trying to figure out a rhyme or scheme. this one here was what you felt and like said something ppl can relate to. maybe now that you have some feelings down try to expand on it and make it a poem.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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