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05-18-05, 09:45 PM | #1 | |||||||
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a last the palms of my calloused hands have been turned turned towards the grey catching the words that each will say the arguments which when released are interpreted as movements of the once quiet mouth standing here in blue trousers and a soaked white shirt tears of rain race down my face at a pace set by the previous years they laugh and they giggle as they trickle down the contours of my cheeks raising pathways that have been hidden , running as though smitten with the gravity that leads them that lead them to the ultimate goal when, water meets ground if you have ever watched water fall on to a wood floor? at times it acts as though it has to climb back up, the wood floor, which portrays the wants and needs of a thousand seems to clutch and bring the droplet back to the safety of its grasp. and for the moment , like a love cursed by summer. they attempt to join and become one, but eventually as the summer soon dissipates as does the droplet. the human tendencies though similar are as we were given the distinct challenge of choice Choice, is what gives us the chance to love . the love that we have... especially when we lose someone. just doesn't go away , nor does it die yet it takes its place among the millions of other lost feelings, waiting to be resurrected, and nurtured , waiting for a day back in the light the beauty of the moment is forever harnessed by that of the caretaker and at times the connection between certain events are acknowledged this though brings a burden on both the heart and the soul leading up to times when all one can do is remember... ... summer loves , when the future played no role , and the play seemed to go on forever. when we made our best memories.
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05-21-05, 05:19 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: CF4E 8780
uppin this..................uppin this ..............god loves ugly
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05-25-05, 06:41 PM | #3 | |||||
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lol^ i thought this was written very well, you have your own style with your words, and how you write,i like that,i liked the message in this last part of the poem, good job on this man,keep dropping.1
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