Right now i've come to a realisation,
Reflectin on myself came to a self-actualisation,

*As I Question Who I Was, Who Was I To Be As I Look In The Mirror, Starin At My Eyes Filled With Fears And Rerrors*

I Saw Something I Didn't Like Lookin At,
The Person I Had Become Where My Life Was At,

*Wastin, Throwin My Life Takin Things For Granted Now Im Left Here On My Own With Nothing Truly Wanted, Lettin Opportunities Pass Me By And I'd Expect Myself To Fly To The Sky But Why?*

Am I Doin This To My Very Self,
When I Know I Got The Capabilites To Make It All Happen For Myself,

Alot Just Holds Me Back, Im Carrying All This Burden,
I Get Riccheched Between Wals, It Just Hurts When A Conflict Is Occurin,
-Inside-
A Battle Ragin Inflamin My Spirit To Die In Time,

The Falmes Engluf, Im Wrapped Trapped No Way I Can Get Free,
Cause No One's There To Put Out The Flames That Has Been Ignitioned In Me,

I Need The Air To Give Me Life,
Do What I Got To Do To Prevent All Strife,

I Want This Knife Taking Out Of This Heart Of Mine,
Revive From The Dark And Emerge Into The Light,
To Have The Might To Take Hold Of My Burnin Desires, To Fight,

The Only Fire Is The One Blazin In My Soul,
The Determination To Go On To Make My Whole,
World Shine With Light Again,
To Be Good And Turn Away From This Life Of Sin,

*Let The Lord Back In To Help Me Win The Battles Within Me From Darkness, To Take It Down And Render It Helpless, Cause I Need Help With Everything Occurin, So I Can Break Out Of This Prison With My Guns Blazin, So I Can Hold Me Head Up High Towards The Heavens, And Be Proud Of The Life Im Now Livin*

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y dat shit was hotta i like the flow of it

fav part
The Only Fire Is The One Blazin In My Soul,
The Determination To Go On To Make My Whole,
World Shine With Light Again,
To Be Good And Turn Away From This Life Of Sin,


dat whole shit was hott

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A real nice and emotional piece. I liked it all and had really no fav part. It was just really good. Nice drop and the flow was nice for a poem. I am working on a poem as we speak and will have it dropped soon.

Keep it up. BTW..this is 999

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yo that shit was hott-like the mood it set-its real...... feel me..............

yo that shits suppose to say ya feel me? lol

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yo this was a good piece.........the emotion was there i was feeling it..........your also

had good imagery..........it was a great piece you should keep up wit this shit......the

flow in this piece was good and your structure wasnt that bad....keep it up


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