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01-20-06, 07:14 AM | #1 | ||||
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"Easy Come And Easy Go"...Serious Fire...I Surprised Myself With This One...
IP: 2EF1 1720
www.soundclick.com/limitededitioncan
Word...listen to the track and see for yourself. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219956 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219890 |
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01-20-06, 07:40 AM | #2 | |||
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IP: 1ADC A69C
hate to be a jerk, but same issues with EQ levels here...when u get ur new set up, it's gonna take ur audio to another level bro
neway I like the heaviness of the beat love the hook...though it could stand to be amp'ed a notch ur flow is nice here...with the story telling vibe...delivery matched the flow Life after death, only Eazy E knows?...how is that when at least 10 rappers have died? ^^other than that glaring mistake...lyrics were good for the most part good track 1 |
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01-20-06, 01:37 PM | #3 | |||||
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yeah listning..............
nice beat...................hard banger...... flows sikk................ delieverys nice................................. but like q said about eq levelz.............. lyrics r nice hook is illy too............. nice drop man one of yer best definitly.............9/10 sikk drop fam rtf on my new joint............................ 1 Feed used 1/20/06 "2 Kingz(feat Trifty)"
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01-20-06, 02:57 PM | #4 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: 3E18 C2E9
Intros Koo.
I Like your flow deliverys nice lovin these lyrics they deep emotions koo your voice is dope presence is dope i like the hook,should be upped a lil on volume i think 2nd verse likin the lryics more flow seems the same,still dope 3rds koo..................... yeah feelin it Downloadin
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01-21-06, 11:13 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 826C 4C70
Thanks for the feed...
Wow at all the sleepers though... Uppin this bitch. |
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01-22-06, 07:08 PM | #7 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: D06E 6198
shiiitty quality prob the worst on rv lol
damn at the multis ok lyrics kind of played topic also this beat is kind of boring and plain chorus sounds wierd i really am not feeling thsi track because of the beat 6.5/10
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01-22-06, 07:15 PM | #8 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 3013 571D
okay...u def need a de-esser an a compressor...especially on hook.....the quality took a big chuck outta this song.......flow was good but lacked variations u need to change it up sum..not too much but jus enuff to keep it fresh.....delivery is angry but inconsistent...u go in & out of monotoness......which seems to be breathe control, related...damn man....barring quality this coulda been SOOOOOOOO much iller....but anyways stay up....keep dropping.......1
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Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
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01-22-06, 11:33 PM | #9 | ||||
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IP: 2EF1 1720
Thanks for the feed...
Uppin... I will return the favor, just leave some links... |
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01-23-06, 02:26 AM | #10 | ||||||
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IP: 565E A137
I love the idea of the of the song fam definitely.. flow is good but like Tripple N said you need variation to add flavor to your verses. THe hook is the strong point of the song but the quality takes away from that. You just need to learn how to use the de-esser and the compressor to keep your levels about even. Cause it bounces a bit. The 3rd verses was lower than the other two verses. But the emotion is there everything you need is there you just have to construct it properly and you have a great song on your hands. WHen you're recording at home rapping is only half of the battle. i learned that first hand. You can have a dope song but the quality makes it average. Mixing is a very big part of recording at home so you have to master that as well.. good shit overall though just a couple minor set backs...
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01-23-06, 06:23 PM | #11 | ||||
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IP: 2EF1 1720
Thanks for the feed...
Actually last night, I re-recorded with much better quality... ...But I'm not gonna upload it just yet. Uppin'. |
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