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Since no one read my 1st
IP: 7E66 A2E6
I kept tossing ang turning, eyes burnng
yerning for a moment of sweet sleep id pay a farmer just to throw one sheep cool and dark, couldnt see a soul thought i heard to bubble of a packed bowl rays of light bounced off the floor smoke trickaled in under the door,score The a mist forms, out of nowhere to escape then some eyes and a face began to take shape Nas apeared before me, as ghost that night telling me I should more time when I write jumbled medafores and misplace meaning Got my tung tide and Micphone fiending words become picture, vidid as kodak air wisles, the spearker begin to crack lyrics get scribled all over the track As if freshly writen, on a glosey back He spoke of images of everyday events Religion and a nation of only 5 percent paint with my words, and brush with my tung For the wise, the journy has only just begun the visualition began to dislove away then like on Q the sun cracked day fuck it, it was to early god damn anyway Skew It on the Bar-B, illmatic emcee The 5 deady vemons race inside of me Old School Favor like a addias B-boy On a mission of peace and destroy Rebuild a nation, repopulation Backpacker dump tracks on there back G's stop talking about slanging crack, My flow save lifes as it's takes control With rare souls that hear my voicals It signals there death like a banshee maybe, I'll grab my nuts and holded on There Aint no fat lady, And this ain't the end last song So do it for the pen, pad, the word Do it for underground the weak and unheard for the 2 am, late night insomea writers gettig the drop on the 2 pm beat bitters Do it for the Reels that just don't stop. for those yelling out HIP HOP HIP HOP |
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IP: 4013 53EF
shit this was dope for a newb
I really felt it, it had nice flow and nicer content i was Really feelin it, i think you could be a very good writer after some time, evry nice peice, could u pls reply to on of the peices in my sig......thanks
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IP: 6F9E F23B
not a bad attempt for a new boy......Gud attempt
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IP: DD10 0DFF
1 Open Mic Per Day...Follow The Rules.
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