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03-18-05, 02:00 PM | #1 | |||||||
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A Informal Intoduction...
IP: A071 35D8
[B][SIZE=4]Action is believable and that is factual. Truth is seen never spoken. Everything is real. The time and what must be done.
And now we are here. Don't get caught "just" listening in the moments of time. Everything will move whether it moves or not. Does it move you or do you move it? Emcee: Master of Creations/ Master Creating/ Master Creates/ Master Constructions/ Master Constructing/ Master Constructs...[/SIZE][/B]
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03-18-05, 06:05 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: D5FE 7245
ok.........................
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Most Recent Funniest Line "I dont go to malls cuz i dont like shoppin I cant buy clothes when the manikins are watchin" -Canibus |
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03-18-05, 06:52 PM | #3 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
ight welcome here stay active & battle often as u can
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03-18-05, 09:32 PM | #4 | ||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 6858 D980
nice verses peeps but Wicked definately took this.
A_M_H: Ya verse flowed so good man, it was looking like a fuckin topical. That fat - mcdonalds thing was going at start, middle and end. Your punches were real good, some nice metas, nice vocab and decent structure. Easy to read and enjoyable too. -Long and full of quality. Best bar: "ya get beat up for ya change when u walk into the schools halls run home hide in the corner cryin and poundin ya flabby fists on the walls" -Liking this for some reason loads. Opponent: Nice verse bro, with some real good punches. Only reason you lost this is cos he had the volume of quality wen yours was in moderation. Ya opener was good and your close was sublime! Well done for making this red hot verse but oyu should have extended it. best bar: "Fuck faggot, dickrider...how can you say your straight You'll do anything for White, and it wont be cocaine" -This is good, and your closer too. No hate Poppy, keep doing ya thing |
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03-18-05, 09:51 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: D5FE 7245
^what the fuck was that
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Most Recent Funniest Line "I dont go to malls cuz i dont like shoppin I cant buy clothes when the manikins are watchin" -Canibus |
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03-19-05, 10:04 AM | #6 | |||||||
New to RV
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A FORMAL intro...
IP: B6CA C51D
[B][FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=4]You not understanding this/ And I know why/ No more lies
We come with the truth/ Like John Wilkes Booth Country in a Frenzy/ No value in a penny Everything be changing/ All things rearranging What they mean by a New World Order/ Got you on a Video recorder Guns in every corner/ One shot you a goner And you want to bone her/ After you born her Sickening in the sight/ Freaks come out at night Freeze in the dawn of the day/ Used condoms and dead bodies are the litter after the play Six thousand years given/ A illusional life is what was living Fast food order window you at/ Check your health/ You be fat Not like Joe/ You stupid/ Like Larry, Curly and Moe Can you talk without a curse/ My vocabulary so big/ It make your head burst I be straight talking/ Straight walking/ And falsehood stalking Now this my FORMAL introduction/ or induction/ or abuction It do matter/ Like a full bladder So take your place and your pick/ Chose wrong/ and eat a ... All the while we be working/ Never jerking We own this/ Your best dreams are a wish/ Fish Out of water/ Around here/ No fear/ Or fright Got evil and the traits of it in my sight Now we get to the hook/ The title of a chapter in a book [I]He makes all things new/ What you gonna do As I move/ Like Rakim moved the Crowd It will only be just a few and the proud/ Say it loud I am Black and Proud[/I] More verses to come/ Right now I will just hit you with a dum-dum Injuries are slight/ Didn't use all my might I will let you know tho'/ These don't be playing fo sho/ Or Fe Sheezy Everything is real/ You playing with steel/ So be easy Or go hard/ If that is how you wanna come/ Cause after these we got full metal jackets/ And tennis rackets We be hittin balls back/ And rushin nets/ Lobbing brains/ After lobotomy checks Where my real people at/ I didn't have to ask that They on quiet/ A quiet riot Thats going on in the mental/ Its fudamental/ Check the first verse Then check your pulse/ And make arrangements for a hearse/ Or just go curse Or just go/ Talking about how long you been here/ You want sympathy and a tear/ Or tear away/ And go away/ Away/ A way long time coming But we be coming/ Can you hear me/ Or you think we just funning In a minute you will come to know/ We come for work/ We just arrived tho Back to the hook/ The title of a chapter in a book [I]He makes all things new/ What you gonna do As I move/ Like Rakim moved the Crowd It will only be just a few and the proud/ Say it loud I am Black and Proud[/SIZE][/FONT][/I][/B]
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Say : O my people, work in your place. Surely I am a worker, so you will come to know... Last edited by WORKER : 03-19-05 at 10:15 AM. |
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