took about 20 mins blah so???feedback?

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Joshua Christopher Sumner
May 1, 1985 - October 8, 2004
"You Will Be Missed"

upp...for feedback you little shits LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

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Joshua Christopher Sumner
May 1, 1985 - October 8, 2004
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its iight but need sum more color in there

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im gonna totally tell you what you do to make it better...this isnt meant to sound harsh so dont take it the wrong way...

1)that grid is way too intense...if you are gonna do a grid do it in a color that looks good with the rest of the sig and do it about 20% opacity...you dont want the grid to be the focal point of your sig...

2)the subtext is too big and the main text isnt big enough...its like a power struggle for which one is gonna be the main text...

3)the main text is in a color that doesnt go well with the rest of the sig...if you suck at matching colors go to a paint site and copy and paste one of those paint cards into your sig and sample colors from it with the dropper...they all go together and it makes your sig look better...i did it that way until i got more of an eye for complimentary colors...

4)im not a big fan of more that one person in a sig...if you are gonna do it its better to break them up with the text between them and you have to make them match...go to blending options on both of them and do a color overlay of the same color at about 30% opacity...fiddle with it until they look like they match...this is also good for making a picture match your background...if i were you id sample the color for the overlay from your background...

if you do all that you are on your way to elevating in sigs...this is good for a sig rookie but it just lacks some of the finesse that it needs...the elements clash with each other...at the risk of sounding like a hippie you want your sig to send out one vibe like a unified feeling of the whole sig...you have to do this with colors...people wont notice it when they see it but the sig will give them more of a feeling when they see it...i think it was the game that said "authors dont write books where chapter three doesnt have shit to do with chapter 12"...

im not trying to sound hard on it...its a pretty good sig but it will be better once you fix those things...

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no problem we need harshness in the world

check AI tryout thread...bamboo style....

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Joshua Christopher Sumner
May 1, 1985 - October 8, 2004
"You Will Be Missed"

didnt i make you a sig before?

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yes...of course....dude wait a sec i'll rock it

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Joshua Christopher Sumner
May 1, 1985 - October 8, 2004
"You Will Be Missed"

ha...i cant keep up with your name changes...you need a new one?

i like ashlanda better than this new name...it reminds me of a nun sneaking around with a gun shooting people...

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lmao...i know man....but dude....i like alias LOL

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Joshua Christopher Sumner
May 1, 1985 - October 8, 2004
"You Will Be Missed"

coming to theaters this fall

*cut to nun with pistol*

*heartbeat sounds*

voiceover: "she has witnessed corruption in the catholic church for years and shes ready to get even"

*zoom in on a priests head through a window from outside*

*black screen*

*silenced gunshots*

deadly habit...rated r...

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