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06-18-03, 04:05 PM | #1 | |||||||
Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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narrow minded
IP: A175 060F
my mind runs a one track course.//
guns an' drug sacks first,// next comes sex an' once I'm done that tha chorus.// but before this it's torment for dem dick-ryda's an' whore-men.// corner surfers suffer thru muster gas dusters.// plus this lust for words got me stuck on verbs.// add-lib automatic pro-nouns leavin' competition pronounced dead on arrival.// all my rivals sent to a point beyond revival,// commin' on stage wearin' so many colours like I'm try'n-a be tribal.// I'm tha kind that'll bribe a preecher while he's readin' ta bible.// call me evils desciple, illegal insida trading an' launderin' so much money you could call me Mc-Maid.// a made man with more damaged brain stems than sedam husain has.// plus I roll with tha same clan in the eyes of the same man, president bush.// the united nations resident "tush", ASS, terrorize him an' a generation back..// (hi dad) I laugh when I heard about coloumbine high shot up by them guys that no-one liked.// like they was pushed to the point of max tention, if I was their teacher I wouldn't even suspend-um.// I'd hand-um a comendation an' announce a celebration thru-out the entire nation.// split personalities, I'm a one man collaboration.// exageratin' on callibraton, put a 45 down your throat, that should appease your oral fixation.// while I'm watchin' strip tease jackin' off in my grandparents basement.// loosin' patience as my head grows weightless from my wrists laceration.// pass tha bacon, I ain't want beef, but I will have some cheese with my wine.// please, it's just fine, my memory's almost dry, gotta squeeze out my rhymes.// I breath out an' die, from these ammounts of lines I tried.// like 9 g's I'm high, geeez, makes me wonder why I'd ever buy weed.// TOTAL KEYSTYLE.... let me know what u think 'bout it
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06-18-03, 04:22 PM | #2 | ||||||
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uuuummm...this was hot shit...i'll expand a little, the flow stayed on point most of the time went a little choppy at times...probably jus the way i was reading itBLAH, vocab was there, wordplay was very ceative...for a freestyle, nice multi's. liked reading it.
if ya got time hit up a battle of mine in front lines cuz there getting slept on. ~1~ |
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06-18-03, 04:57 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: A175 060F
uppin'
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06-18-03, 05:30 PM | #4 | ||||||
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yo son this shit was hot like the whole scheme and everything
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06-18-03, 06:51 PM | #5 | |||||||
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YO BLUNT YOU'RE SICK MAN, WHERE DID SOME OF THE STUFF YOU SAY COME FROM. ANYWAY, THE RHYME STYLE WAS HOT KID. THIS DON'T LOOK LIKE A NARROW MIND TO ME MAN. UPPPPIINNN FAM. LET'S GET THE CROWN! DOPE DROP!
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06-18-03, 10:12 PM | #6 | ||||||
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shit was tight man
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06-19-03, 06:57 AM | #7 | ||||||||
shit is just too easy.
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Pretty Much Summed It All Up |
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06-19-03, 08:34 AM | #8 | ||||||
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add-lib automatic pro-nouns leavin' competition pronounced dead on arrival.//
all my rivals sent to a point beyond revival,// pretty hot shit right here..nice drop |
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06-19-03, 07:03 PM | #9 | |||||||
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does every1 in bre dr there better opponents or does it just seem that way??? any blunt dope drop man good flo and vocab
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06-20-03, 10:09 AM | #10 | |||||||
Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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IP: A175 060F
seeeen... thx 4 all the feedback, keep it comin',.... or not 'cause there'll be a next one comin' today....
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