TAKE A SEC BEFOR YA READ?
PUT THIS IN YOUR PRESPECTIVE AN SEE IF YA CAN FELATE TO IT IN ANY WAY [FEED BACK WOULD BE NICE THA FAVOUR WILL BE RETURNED]

Can ya picture this
catchin up ta god quicker than this
an wounderin if ya were ever missed?
somthin like i wish ta end it all... a few words said on a mic
tha next day ya get a call, shit i should have kept my mouth shut.
now im bein sued for not breakin a law? ahhhhhhhhhh god dammit

haven flash backs of someone runnin up in my house
never got tha chance ta blast back or knock em' out
tell me what lifes about ,
if ya wanna rap ya gotta have a reason
worlds being ripted up how's a brotha sappose ta keep breathin,
somtimes i dont think iv'e got tha strenght,,,spittin out crazy
rhymes in three miniutes forty seconds in lenght..........

my eyes might decieve me, believe me but i look at all artist 's deeply
wounderin how things got tuned around. some of there reasons ta write,
half of them could have joined a circius an become tha town's clown right?
some of us are here on a money mission, that doesnt make scence to
some of us how are still around only tha good ones are missin.

i aint affraid to die i wanna see whats after this
tell my family i said goodbye [FONT=Times New Roman]AN DONT CRY
I LEFT U WITH THIS
[SIZE=3] MY WORDS CB83

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this is ok shit....but you can elevate a lot.....i can tell you tried to get deep emotion in this one.....but it went on and off....i could've swore you bit in this but maybe it wasn't intended i dunno

Can ya picture this

movie called the Prison Song when the dude is rappin outside but i dunno what he says after "Can ya picture this "

and

i aint affraid to die i wanna see whats after this

2 Pac + Outlawz CD

Song-You Can Be Touched

7/10
return the favor in my Open Mics
but overall i can tell you a beginner so keep elevating

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