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Old 04-07-03, 06:47 PM   #1
PeaseDEase
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Ghetto White Girl Style (new at this)

IP: FFB7 7A39

Guns in ma hands, one night stands, raps I spittin, what I want I getting, hittin dem bitches, makin dem riches, adrenaline rush with my tease and plush- not ghetto fab, but dey sure wanna grab!

Pease D’Ease so get on ur knees, the biggest tease, fo sheeze- know how ta work it, twirk it- just cuz I know how ta jerk it, not like the rest, cuz u gotta pass my test, I lick it best!

But chu gotta earn it, you’ll learn that I aint givin witout recievin, decievin, needin it first, so u better be maxin thirst, whats the worse that could happin, with this ass u tappin? Tr-tr-tr appin u in my world, but I aint be slappin, no control long as u my bitch!

What chu want I give, live life high, screamin out ur cry, no extasy needed, everynite u pleaded fo more, so holla at me, I’m only next door- knock twice if ya wanna slice, a piece of dis ass, and move it fast, I top quality bitch, ghetto white girl style, comin atcha fo a while!

No bling bling needed, cuz I already feeded with da cash wit dis stash, no pimp trash- not bein annoying like an itch that agrivates and leaves a rash- I aint da baddest bitch ya ever seen, but I don’t keep it clean, dats what u guys desire- set fire, hands working magic, nothing tragic- just estatic!

Wit my white ass looking so ghetto, gotta work at what I got, so if u want a shot, I be expectin a lot- trot trot trot- brains who be nearing me rot, putting it in the slot- minds paralyzed with every touch, such actions cause serious mental phases, bein wit a man then seein em stuck in dazes, thinking of our intimate time togetha, wearin nuttin but leatha!

What chu want I give, live life high, screamin out ur cry, no extasy needed, everynite u pleaded fo more, so holla at me, I’m only next door- knock twice if ya wanna slice, a piece of dis ass, and move it fast, I top quality bitch, ghetto white girl style, comin atcha fo a while!

What chu want I give, live life high, screamin out ur cry, no extasy needed, everynite u pleaded fo more, so holla at me, I’m only next door- knock twice if ya wanna slice, a piece of dis ass, and move it fast, I top quality bitch, ghetto white girl style, comin atcha fo a while!

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Old 04-07-03, 07:48 PM   #2
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hmm, this is in need of elavation, dont just write down a load of words that rhyme and write anything to fill in the gaps because it sounds wack, and construct your rhymes with bars so they're easier to read.
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Old 04-08-03, 01:27 AM   #3
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Unhappy Re: Ghetto White Girl Style (new at this)

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Originally posted by PeaseDEase
Pease D’Ease so get on ur knees

What?... Aren't you a ghetto white girl? Or is that just your style...?
Color me confused, and unimpressed.

This is the gift of bad commercial rap, people.

You'll find most people don't give a lot of props for this sort of la la.
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