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Old 01-25-09, 06:30 PM   #1
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Week 2 C- Match: Red Bull (1-0) .vs one way (1-0) -Ready For Votes--

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Sunday Night: Battles are set up
Wednesday: Red Bull 1 bar
Thursday: one way 2 bars
Friday: Red Bull 1 bar
Sunday: Battles Close

Feeding is allowed and will be optional
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Old 01-25-09, 08:41 PM   #2
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check..........
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Old 01-25-09, 10:34 PM   #3
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Old 01-26-09, 12:20 AM   #4
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It's been a while for me kid, but there's only one way to win,
And the secret to success is not dropping like him ^.
 
Old 01-26-09, 05:11 PM   #5
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Don’t act dope your quite possibly the weakest on the scene
I’m like Freddy Krueger…..you’ll only beat me in your dreams
But don’t worry homie, I’ll give a good reason for you to sit and pretend
Cause when I knock your teeth out you’ll have something to spit in the wind
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Old 01-26-09, 05:57 PM   #6
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I admire your strength even if you're whack and confused,
'Cause yeah, you are just like Freddy..
...............................you keep coming back here to lose.
 
Old 01-26-09, 10:02 PM   #7
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ADAM
It's been a while for me kid, but there's only one way to win,
And the secret to success is not dropping like him ^.
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tHIS WAS A COOL PUNCH...GOOD WORD PLAY


I admire your strength even if you're whack and confused,
'Cause yeah, you are just like Freddy..
...............................you keep coming back here to lose.
THIS WAS MEH,




One wAY
Don’t act dope your quite possibly the weakest on the scene
I’m like Freddy Krueger…..you’ll only beat me in your dreams
tHIS WAS MEDIOCRE...

But don’t worry homie, I’ll give a good reason for you to sit and pretend
Cause when I knock your teeth out you’ll have something to spit in the wind
nOT HARSH ENOUGH, BUT IT WAS DESCENT



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ADAM HAD THE HARDEST HITTING PUNCH IN THIS BATTLE WITH THE NAMEPLAY PUNCH. HIS PUNCHES WERE MORE CREATIVE...THE 1ST PUNCH WAS THE BEST PUNCH OF THE BATTLE.


vOTE - ADAM
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Old 01-26-09, 11:03 PM   #8
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It's been a while for me kid, but there's only one way to win,
And the secret to success is not dropping like him ^.

^i've seen this used against him too many times.


I admire your strength even if you're whack and confused,
'Cause yeah, you are just like Freddy..
...............................you keep coming back here to lose.

Kind of simple, but definately a nice feed. Thats a big part of this
league, being able to see the ability of a battler feeding. Cool punch.




Don’t act dope your quite possibly the weakest on the scene
I’m like Freddy Krueger…..you’ll only beat me in your dreams

This had potential, its kind of a played concept. But your wording
was almost there. I think this could have been dopeish. ok bar


But don’t worry homie, I’ll give a good reason for you to sit and pretend
Cause when I knock your teeth out you’ll have something to spit in the wind

eh, nice wordplay. Nicely worded, but harshness of the punch? not really!


Close one here, but i'm gon have to go for one way.
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Old 01-27-09, 01:04 AM   #9
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not bad battle Close 1 to vote on but id say adam got it with the combak lines and punches

although 1 way had a nice creative comeback i liked the last bar even if its not harsh ..


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Old 01-27-09, 09:07 PM   #10
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ADAM
It's been a while for me kid, but there's only one way to win,
And the secret to success is not dropping like him ^.

this was ok, a little simple but the name play on him was ok


I admire your strength even if you're whack and confused,
'Cause yeah, you are just like Freddy..
...............................you keep coming back here to lose.
lol, i liked this flip on his bar and your right...Freddy never wins




One wAY
Don’t act dope your quite possibly the weakest on the scene
I’m like Freddy Krueger…..you’ll only beat me in your dreams
seems like old concept and weak ass wording..and again simply generic

But don’t worry homie, I’ll give a good reason for you to sit and pretend
Cause when I knock your teeth out you’ll have something to spit in the wind
not a bad bar, wasn't like overally great because the bar itself was just a punch...not a personal or wordplay..but just a simply generic punch


overal: i'd say Red Bull took this one...he had 2 decent punches with a mediocre flip to One's mediocre punch

just throwing geric ass punches with nothign tieing them into your opponet works well in long battles becuase they make good fillers/punches...but ina 1-2..you have to much more creative and personal

that or you have to be able to have a great feed and flip on the other guys punch

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Old 01-28-09, 07:40 AM   #11
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It's been a while for me kid, but there's only one way to win,
And the secret to success is not dropping like him ^.
thats ok

Don’t act dope your quite possibly the weakest on the scene
I’m like Freddy Krueger…..you’ll only beat me in your dreams
ok but lol... wtf.. the correlation coulda been to anyone. Text needs to be more direct for that better effect ya dig
But don’t worry homie, I’ll give a good reason for you to sit and pretend
Cause when I knock your teeth out you’ll have something to spit in the wind
you completely ruined this analogy and im angry at you for it

I admire your strength even if you're whack and confused,
'Cause yeah, you are just like Freddy..
...............................you keep coming back here to lose.
killed his only chance with this, no more deciding

v/ adam
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Old 01-28-09, 11:40 AM   #12
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It's been a while for me kid, but there's only one way to win,
And the secret to success is not dropping like him ^.

too simple

Don’t act dope your quite possibly the weakest on the scene
I’m like Freddy Krueger…..you’ll only beat me in your dreams
^^nah
But don’t worry homie, I’ll give a good reason for you to sit and pretend
Cause when I knock your teeth out you’ll have something to spit in the wind
^^um no


I admire your strength even if you're whack and confused,
'Cause yeah, you are just like Freddy..
...............................you keep coming back here to lose.
^^won the battle

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Old 01-28-09, 03:54 PM   #13
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Don’t act dope your quite possibly the weakest on the scene
I’m like Freddy Krueger…..you’ll only beat me in your dreams
..
only line i liked
..
i really diss liked both of adams, and i hate that ^ type of punches.


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Old 01-31-09, 08:28 AM   #14
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5-2 Red Bull wins 2-0

one way loses 1-1
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