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Old 04-30-05, 01:33 PM   #1
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When I rhyme it's climatic
Cuz my thoughts are sporadic
At times I look like an addict
My words seem like well planned tactics
In this war of verbal magic
What seperates me and you is I can hack it

No one can ammount to my affinity
For this uncanny and eerie ability
To conjur these perfected linguistically
Words that grow in outrageous propensity
While I relay this verbal density
To those who think and act synically

When they believe they can challenge me
They force me to be serious and act callously
Even though when I rhyme I seem to act casually
So others are then consumed by jealousy
Which sooner or later leads to ecstacy
Cuz they soon realize my words are formed eclectically




uppin fa feedbacc
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Old 04-30-05, 03:10 PM   #2
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This would sound sick if spat nicely....ill buy these lyics off you...name your price.
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Old 04-30-05, 05:11 PM   #3
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thank u thank u...uppin fa more
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Old 04-30-05, 10:13 PM   #4
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very hot shit dawg
vocab was very nice
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Old 04-30-05, 10:15 PM   #5
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When I rhyme it's climatic
Cuz my thoughts are sporadic
At times I look like an addict
My words seem like well planned tactics
In this war of verbal magic
What seperates me and you is I can hack it



kinda sounds like Eminem's " Till I Collapse " intro.. butt... its pretty good
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Old 05-01-05, 12:08 AM   #6
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fa real? which cd iz dat on cuz i swear i aint heard it...thanx for da complimentz tho




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Old 05-02-05, 01:58 AM   #7
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While I relay this verbal density
To those who think and act synically

When they believe they can challenge me
They force me to be serious and act callously
Even though when I rhyme I seem to act casually
So others are then consumed by jealousy
Which sooner or later leads to ecstacy
Cuz they soon realize my words are formed eclectically


I like that right because it describes the style in which u write and u use for inspiration...Nice vocab and word play
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Old 05-02-05, 04:23 AM   #8
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thnx ma...i mean cocoa
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