Aight 10-16 lines
No h8, dick riding, crew or unexplained votes (LING_LUCIF vote will not be acceptable)
Verses due today

Consider this my check in and oh coz u so confident...u first

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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy

alright so ima gunna go first
if you is tha best than,fuck im the worst
i know im shit and i aint afraid to admit it
at least i aint frontin like im fuckin xibit
i fuckin sed it,are you too blind to read
deaf dumb and too fuckin blind to see
i started this GangsStarShit
and this the muthafuckin thanx i get
i think i went alrite for my 1st time,next time its you
how about you go back to ballet cuz yo ass is through

Shit 2 wack verses i might as well jus 1 line this 1,
Put yo sunglasses on mAtW...coz u about to get "sonned",

U can tell he watched 8 mile the other night,
His 1st verse was a complete self diss...
...um dawg them punches werent swung right,

And the 2nd 1...i swear he got a thang fo sheep,
Well they do got 2 things in common...
...they both get ripped apart & they futures bleak,

Infact sum of u rhymes look bit hmm an eminem fan no doubt,
should've jus posted Em's verse against Papa Doc...
...coz now u'll get banned for wackness damn jus get out,

But outta ur 2 verses the 1st 1 gets one outta ten,
Dawg it was SO CRAP...
...but i jus wanna see it again,

Fuck it i got this so ima waste these lines ya dee ya,
blah blah mAtW ur wack hmm ya u are,

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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy

you said ling_lucif vote is not welcome
i am king_lucif
nah but i aint gonna vote though
shitgansta at least his rhymed dawg
and matw you have low self asteem huh
lmao at least he got a day to rhyme back not 5 FUCKING MINUTES

Ohhh Sumone Is Making It Personal U Got Matw Pissed
Ha Ha Gangsta Prob Wont Get The Dawg Penut Butter Remarke But That Waz A Good One

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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy

mATW
im goin by ur first 2 verses...structure is decent...flow falls off a little bit...no multis...wack wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

GangsStarShit
structure is good..flow is on target...no multis...wordplay is decent...some of ur punches connected...personals were decent...

Overall
neither had multis...GangsStarShit had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...GangsStarShit gets my vote for the better verse...

VOTE - GANGSSTARSHIT

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx...

GangsStarShit takes this hands down. mAtW's shit was played, and simple. flow was simple and no hard punches or personals. Gang's punches hit harder and his flow was better. Which gives him the all around vote.

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READY FOR WAR

CHECK THIS OUT IN OPEN MIC...NEED FEEDBACK
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135097

LETS GO!!!!!!!!!!

/\. and mAtW a merk is on the cards aka KING_LUCIF ha ha what a herb anyway stop spittin coz nobody is gonna go off ur verses u post now ha ha

/\ and recent verse...no comment

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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy

Bitch Fuck You Me And You Are Tied 1-1
Caliph Revoted Biatch
So It Looks Like U Aint Murkin Noone Except Him
And My Spit Took 5min Flat And Were Still Tied Now Thats Sad So Shut The Fuck Up

Fuck You Dikhead Why Did You Throw His Vote Out Again
That Was Detaild
Throwin Out Caliphs Vote Cause Ya Dont Wanna Tie Against The New Kid

i'm a drop a vote for gangstar b-cos matw first verse is the verse am going on n i thing gangstar won him in every catagory + the rules stated 10-16 lines matw spitt bout 50 lines lmfao !

v gang*shit

remember we all need votes so drop a EXPLAINED vote at this link

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1442922

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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy