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"The Revelation"

I Got A Cold So It might be A Lil Fucked Lol

Left Feed On-

Apexx-1st cut off the Kiss of the White Widow mixtape - Gutta. Apexx. aint shit els to say!

the Mesenger-New Drop

Aight Holla

I Will Rtf Leave Links

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Listenin...like how u said turn the beat up like u said sum producer ...playin..ok quality is iffy...vocals are too high...turn em down...beat is dope...i rlly like the flow...presence n delivery is hot but its too loud..i like how u repeat words at the end...it seems its not positiioned correctly...like the hooks and the verses..but the lyrics are nice...flow is kool..verse 1 is the strongest..like how u emphasise words...2nd verse is aiite..do a vocal cut on this i think (filters - graphic eq - vocal cut)...and i like how u repeated the chorus rite at the end..this is pretty good track..jus needs to be produced right

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O word...My Mic Fucked Up Lol..The Conection Got Half Pulled Out

Arggh @ Volume Some Say Too Loud Some Say Too Low
LOL

Thx For Feed Upp!

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is the beginning of this the hook?

I couldn't tell. If it is the hook, then it needs to be distingushed more from the verse.


I think you have a good flow. BUt, to be honest with you, it's starting to get boring to me. One way to add variety to your flow is to be more creative with rhyming and/or delivery.



Not bad...but nothing special.


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Aigth Thx.........Uppppppppppp

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