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02-25-05, 07:48 PM | #1 | |||||||
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SPARK THAT CLIP feat SENSER
IP: C846 7BAD
my links i left feed on
link 1 link2 we may still do a outro and intro to this but we'll wait and see now to see what people think anyways new track here called spark that clip feat senser hit the link below that says spark that clip spark that clip link
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02-25-05, 07:56 PM | #2 | |||||
I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 80D6 7866
OK... its playin...
Beat is alright. Not bad... But not excellent. Cali: It sounds like your vocals are too loud, OR youre too close to the mic. Also you dont sound very confident on this one. Needs a bit more emotion. Dubs need to be better. Lyrics were on and off. Flow was pretty good. Hook is cool. Senser: Nice presence, nice flow. Nice production. Lyrics were pretty good.
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02-25-05, 08:02 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: C846 7BAD
i thought my emotion was good dubz were purposly done that way for the echo but ok omb i respect ya opinon
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02-25-05, 08:03 PM | #4 | |||||
I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 80D6 7866
Word.... just feels like ive heard better from you
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02-25-05, 08:07 PM | #5 | |||||||
WESTCOAST
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
ok
list'n Cali-not feel'n it at all homie, sorry, no hate but da lyrics iz hot but ya delivery iz trash on here Hook-hot Senser-pretty good, feelin it mayn, real New York type of shit Cali-5/10 Senser-7/10 Overral-6/10 |
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02-25-05, 08:54 PM | #6 | ||||||
20/20 VisioN
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IP: B6D6 F84D
jea i didnt like cali's delivery, lyrics were ight, still seems like sometimes u rhyme just to rhyme, emotion isnt as same as sener.
hook is ight sener has betta quality is this the same verse as u and DI's freestyle collab? lol
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02-25-05, 11:05 PM | #7 | |||||
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IP: 3737 CC4A
Empire: Flow was weird as shit, didn't like it...sound like you be crying, lines was iight...the first verse, lyrically, was better than the second to me, but the second was better flowise..just lacking...
Senser: weird ass voice dog, some parts I couldn't decipher what you was saying. the echos was type gay. but I was feeling ya shit tho, came type hard, gangsta approach, gritty..feelin that...stayed on beat..coo...
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02-26-05, 07:42 AM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: DFC0 887A
listening.....
beat is average.. CALI....voice sounds wierd.....style is different....a lil...sorry senser.....senser is dope.....damn yo this shit is dope....perfect for the beat....i wanna here you spit about some hip hop shit tho...that woudl be dope.. senser owned this shit chorus...is dope.. CALI...quality is wack....this was kinda sorry ive heard way better form you cali..... good thing senser was on that chorus.... i know im just a newb but i listen to audio.thats why i came to this site for the audio... |
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02-26-05, 08:01 AM | #9 | ||||
I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: BACC 8E92
ok listening to this......
Cali.....you need to work on rapping to the beat....you sound like you just rappin to get it over....u need to rap on beat......the beat needed to be louder.....i could barely hear it.......same with SenseR...........SenseR the hook......was iight i've heard better from you.......the ish was hot tho on ya verse....the flow was nice.....we need to get on a collab man.......word.......well man.......this was a overall ehh ok track......luckily SenseR was on it....or it woulda been ........ehh bad.....i mean......Cali you need to switch ur voice to this........and rap to the beat....dont just write......man...woh..this was som you just threw together....... SenseR-On hook=7/10 on Verse=8.5/10 Cali=Verse 1=6/10 Verse 2=6.5/10
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02-26-05, 07:26 PM | #10 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 410D 5029
beat is fuckin dope
nuff said lol,i aint really feelin the first verse,aint givin feed on the secvond cuz i dont have any time,imma do it later |
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02-26-05, 08:34 PM | #11 | ||||
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IP: E1D7 D0FC
well this isnt my style of song.. but i gotta admit the hook on this is DOPE.. CALI i dont wanna sound like a bandwagoner but im not feeling the delivery at all.. i know what u was trying to do..and i think it coulda worked.. maybe redo it.. ughh i dont know.. BUT SenseR's verse was pretty dope.. voice fit real well on that beat.. was feeling it tho.. not to bad not to bad.. stay up pz..
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02-27-05, 04:46 PM | #12 | |||||||
WESTCOAST
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IP: 3C24 EC9E
Cali-u cant take any feedback can u
no, ur flow was not perfect nobody on dis sites flow iz perfect u gotta a net flow nigga u think u really tight rite? face facts and stop bein a lil bitch probly gettin da red shit outta pussy rite now |
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02-27-05, 05:02 PM | #13 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: C910 BCAC
damn I liked this beat.
wasn't really feelin' first cats verse. It was ok. quality was wack. delivery bad, lyrics were nice, but other than that.. eh... hook dude, was dope. same wit second verse, nothin' else to say. Didn't like third verse. Quality was really bad. eh... This track had great potential but the first guy kinda brought it down. 6/10 pc
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02-27-05, 06:10 PM | #14 | |||||
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IP: 3240 794D
Nice beat, i like it...
CALI~you are too close to the mic, but you're delivery is good i think, just some mixing problems, but minor,good lyrics HOOK~is dope... SENSER~nice mic presence and flow, nice lyrics.... overall, you guys sounded good working together, good track, some dope lyrics in this track...whoa
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02-27-05, 07:42 PM | #15 | |||||||
WESTCOAST
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IP: 1CC6 5FDF
who gives a fuck if he had a tongue ring bitch
a nigga dats 24 on da net callin me a fag wen he has 8,000 post fake crip, nigga, stay in New York |
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