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10-14-05, 08:47 AM | #1 | ||||
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Rile1 Vs. Defined
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10-14-05, 11:47 AM | #2 | |||||
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aight here is me check....goodluck
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10-14-05, 10:48 PM | #3 | |||||
The Emcee Shogun
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wordness...checking in...good luck to u too
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10-15-05, 03:57 PM | #4 | |||||
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All the Illiteracy be done youngin..rile1(real1)...Learn quick
ill Teach,Screw over,& Squash you ..................like i was English carpenters quick to Drop shit blah
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10-16-05, 06:40 PM | #5 | |||||
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come on rile dont wait till tuesday to drop man lets go
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10-16-05, 07:55 PM | #6 | |||||
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aight here are 3 links ill give the last after rile drops
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211541 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211520 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211523
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10-16-05, 11:07 PM | #7 | |||||
The Emcee Shogun
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ill drop...I've been busy yo... but Ill prolly have it tomorrow or Tuesday..dont worry, it will be good haha
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10-16-05, 11:14 PM | #8 | |||||
The Emcee Shogun
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comp nerd, ur not threatening, all u do is type, but im here, so its mayday
he sure isn't going to heaven...but he would die if I smashed his gateway meh... at least I posted schweet lol
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10-17-05, 01:46 PM | #9 | ||||||
Insane in the textbrain
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All the Illiteracy be done youngin..rile1(real1)...Learn quick
ill Teach,Screw over,& Squash you ..................like i was English carpenters quick to Drop shit ^^yeah like you said, "blah" no real punch to this, threat and "like" bar combined = hard to make dope vs. comp nerd, ur not threatening, all u do is type, but im here, so its mayday he sure isn't going to heaven...but he would die if I smashed his gateway ^^good concept, badly worded and stretched, but it hits saying he's a comp nerd etc. v/rile1
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10-17-05, 04:17 PM | #10 | |||||
The Emcee Shogun
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I meant to put " he would go to hell if I smashed his gateway" but its w/e... thanks Vas
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10-17-05, 06:43 PM | #11 | ||||||
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i thought defined's carpenter like was pretty weak to be honest. the punchline was poorly structured. rile1 got straight to the point with a wittier punch.
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10-18-05, 08:22 AM | #12 | ||||
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v/ rile1
wow real1 and rile1 sound nothing alike so i don't even know what the point of defined's set up was
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10-18-05, 02:23 PM | #13 | |||||
The Emcee Shogun
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^^LOL well thats how I pronounce it...thanks for votes...keep them coming!
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10-18-05, 02:52 PM | #14 | |||||
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v/ rile both punches were subpar but his was at least decent
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10-18-05, 05:09 PM | #15 | ||||
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Defined:
All the Illiteracy be done youngin..rile1(real1)...Learn quick ill Teach,Screw over,& Squash you ..................like i was English carpenters quick to Drop shit Blah, this punch was ok nothing special. no personals. it was a self glorifying diss basically. it wasn;t a direct punch feel me...6/10 [b]Rile: comp nerd, ur not threatening, all u do is type, but im here, so its mayday he sure isn't going to heaven...but he would die if I smashed his gateway LOL wtf. this was garbage. i wasnt feelin this at all. it didnt even make snes. i give it. 2/10 vote: defined weak battle
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