Rules:
Spit Due 30 Min. After Check In..
No c/v
no d/r
no h/v
Lines: 10-14 max
spit due today or dq'd my time
3-0 is ko
ight good luck
U spit first

Closed by KO
-strobe

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yo im spittin first lets go

Aight so i may be new, but that aint shit cuz i dont need a crew/
Im gonna spit it in yo face, You can run but ill give chase/
This is my race, imma gonna be the one to set the pace/
You think you got the upperhand, well really im buryin you in the fuckin sand/
You think your so slick, when really you just got off ur daddy's dick/
i didn't mean to diss you so hard, its just when i get going im hotter than a cuban cigar
Yo G I think you should settle down, cuz u see im just messin around/

i did it as every line across was 2, just so you dont think i came up short

oh aight....ic ic..here's my check in!!!!!!I'll spit in five minutes after hearin this...lolz..

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Boy!!!After hearin u spit you should be tangled wit a chord//
Cuz ur spit sounds like a cryin hore, bein muted should be a award//
Everyday I spit hard to retards like to this boy thinkin he'll reach far//
Boy!!ur whole verse was wack, try agen later but first u betta recharge//
I'll spit like demolition, never out of amunition//
Boy!!No matter wut ur verse would be wack even if it was pre-written//
Here's a proposition, after u bein called a newb u'd better take a lower position//
Listen, try bein called garbage so stop tryin ta be a rap musician//
Imma end this boy easy, quickly, and even wit out tryin//
Cuz ur verse is sad to read, feels like a person is dyin//

3 minutes of wacknes!!!^^^haha..man boy!!i thought u were better then that..
thats coo though....i thought people were good in this site..it's coo though..
good try though boy...good luck!!!!!

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my vote goes 2 Atmophere
Structure: atmosphere
Flow: atmosphere
Punches: atmosphere

flow2crazy u need 2 elevate...ALOT..good battle..

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

uppin it please

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ma fault look...I think atmosphere took this battle but Flow2crazy u need 2 elevate...jus practice ur punches and ur flow a little bit...dats bettah ma fault fo da unexplained vote

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

atmosphere took it pretty easy, other cat ur better than a lot of new cats but not enough, atmosphere took it for havin the punches and stayin on the flow

Flow, you gotta elevate hommie. Low vocab and elementary rap. No punches, multi's nothin. Ya structure was aight I guess..Just keep tryin'.
ATMOSPHERE had the better punches and personals her structure was pretty deicent and just just had the all around better verse.

Vote ATMOSPHERE

Return tha favor plz and vote in my battle!!

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125019

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READY FOR WAR

CHECK THIS OUT IN OPEN MIC...NEED FEEDBACK
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135097

LETS GO!!!!!!!!!!

thanx ppl...plz vote some more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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uppin this plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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uppin this plz

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Boy!!!After hearin u spit you should be tangled wit a chord//
Cuz ur spit sounds like a cryin hore, bein muted should be a award//

Nice line! Atmosphere had this one by far. You name it, she killed flow in it. Flow, you need to elevate, youve got the potential. Atmosphere; nice flow and real good punches. That was my favorite line up there^^^

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