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Old 02-26-05, 12:01 AM   #1
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hook:
let me put this down by hand
one day we be gonna be flowin' a couple grand
cuz we producing this music like an episode of Making The Band(2x)

my 1st verse:
damn rite this is like making the band without P. Diddy
and i make sure none of my raps sound shitty
i make damn sure i only view the best ta public
but fuck it if you hatin on it
then shove it where the girls love it
i ain't gonna have it ya'll tremble like u on the Titanic
as soon as i come in ya'll start ta panic
will fuck u and cram it where u had dick
and yo i got so much beef that it's sickning
and i feel like it's thickning
but i ain't squashin'
so caution cuz pulse u talk shit bout my shit
1 more time and you won't have a fuckin' pulse
and as for Mathwackest shit i ain't even bringin him up
cuz simply i don't give a fuck
so.....

hook 2:
such a good collab
that it'll leave ya ass in rehab
once you clicked it
you got addicted
it's some mind trick shit
so all you homies get wit it (2x)


OneStepBeyond's Verse:
i ain't Pacs reincarnation.. but i could be mistaken for,
an outlaw, and what about ya'll, bein blanant? WHORE,
got a chainsaw for, disruption, what am i taken for?
punches like thunder, what you want from this ancient Thore,
reincarnated, and its all rated for the age mature,
i've been hated more than Shady would for a racial slur,
Just in case these words leak, ima be makin sure,
they're not taken for granted, that they're framed and more,
locked in a safe and stored away, with the same velour,
i wore the day i scored a deal, so my names insured,
so i got my license to spit, and im tight as my ryhmes,
funny how i got my license to kill before my license to drive,
im right with these lines, you know what im ridin beside,
i got a 45 and another after its divided by five,
ain't nobody stoppin me, i will rise to the sky,
so say hi to the guy that'll ride till he dies

hook 3:
put your feet on solid ground
start shit shit like a fuckin' blood hound
and word bout this is gon' be all around (2x)

My 2nd Verse:
thanx ta rapverse i got the chance ta provide worldwide
cant decide why the feeling feels like u just died then came back alive
came into this game open-eyed and created a lyrical tide
but let's put that aside and say my good byes
cuz i'm still thinkin' of retiring but maybe i just need some rewiring
cuz every time i try ta leave someones always inspiring
and there's always sumthin that i'm requiring and acquiring
but there's no way i gon' give up
i think u should tell me wassup
tell me if the dawg of the hood should

hook:
such a good collab
that it'll leave ya ass in rehab
once you clicked it
you got addicted
it's some mind trick shit
so all you homies get wit it (2x)
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Old 02-26-05, 12:11 AM   #2
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yet another one...im impressed...OSB let read his part already so i had a feel for tha track...its hot...jus need a better hook to me...idk...but yeah, 8/10...and hood_dawg, make a move to NOK...we could use ya talent...tell then D.Bill sent u...lmao...stay up
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Old 02-26-05, 12:14 AM   #3
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thanx homie and yo i agree with the hook i have the fuckin hardest times comin up with my hooks so they may be a lil weak but thanx man
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Old 02-26-05, 12:15 AM   #4
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uppin 4 my homie hood...uppin
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Old 02-26-05, 08:03 AM   #5
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uppin for my boy hooddawg.........................
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Old 02-26-05, 01:51 PM   #6
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uppin for hood....................................
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Old 02-26-05, 02:01 PM   #7
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A yo Tony Green thinks it was hot. A little simple in the beginning but OSB picked it up and
Hood got off in verse2. Overall 8.5/10

btw return favor on my 3 O.M.'s
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Old 02-26-05, 04:17 PM   #8
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cool ya'll uppin on the feed
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Old 02-26-05, 07:39 PM   #9
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uppin on my shit yo....let's get more
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Old 02-27-05, 01:07 AM   #10
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get more feed homies....
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Old 02-27-05, 09:09 PM   #11
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uppin............
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Old 02-27-05, 10:23 PM   #12
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this was decent, good drops from both of yall, but why were there 2 diff hooks is my only question. hood dawg u got some flow u need to holla at nok, we makin moves on this damn site.
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Old 02-27-05, 10:29 PM   #13
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yo thats cool i did holla they said they want me in but gots no passcode things dolla-bill was talkin bout yo could u get me in?? and the hook thing thought i'd experiment and do sumthin diffrent but it wasnt as cool as ui thought especially since i suck at choruses but anyways holla at me when u read this dawg
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Old 02-27-05, 10:33 PM   #14
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u need the passwords for what? family only.... i forgot what it was myself lol cuz i just got the cookies that lets u put it in one time and just saves it, but i'll see what i can do. i think erebody wants u in anyway
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Old 02-27-05, 10:40 PM   #15
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cool i'm that good huh?
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