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Old 10-15-04, 08:06 PM   #1
Tha Unknown (Uk)
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Post From Mobsta Ta Gangsta

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Yeah peep this drop an tell me wah you think.
This songs #3 on my up an comin album.



Hook:
I'm A Mobsta
Betta Yet A Gangsta
Neva Fuk Wit Wankstas
Quick Ta Put A Hole Through A Pranksta



Verse 1:
You can call me Capone
or you can call me Al Pachino
either way it go you know
this young niccas Original
but C I'm not screamin Gangsta nicca
I'm jess tryin ta give you
tha facts about these streets my nicca
shippin coke an slaggin dope
on tha blok eryday
I ain't by myself
I keep tha 4 5 cocked
ready ta spray
an I was taught by tha old heads
on how ta get this bread
by pullin kic dows'
an dukin tha feds
So....



Hook:
I'm A Mobsta
Betta Yet A Gangsta
Neva Fuk Wit Wankstas
Quick Ta Put A Hole Through A Pranksta



Verse 2:
I don't fuk wit wankstas
cuz all they do is talk shit
my temper is ta knoc a bitch off
an leave him twitchin in a ditch
now prankstas nicca
dats a hole another subject
me and Lady Terrorist will
knoc they ass off in public
Mob style be it as it may
I'll chop yo fingers an send it
ta yo family tha next day
package locked,shipped,signed,and delivered
tha next tyme I send dem sumthin
it jess might be yo liver
Dat's why....



Hook:
I'm A Mobsta
Betta Yet A Gangsta
Neva Fuk Wit Wankstas
Quick Ta Put A Hole Through A Pranksta



Verse 3:
Now when I say gangasta nicca
I'm not talkin GD
I'm talkin bout a young nicca
wit a old heads personality
now when it comes ta rockin suites
nicca I grow accustom
long coats nicca
wit a pump in it ta bust em'
now dat's how they say
O.G.'s use ta rush em'
tie they ass up
an gag they mouth
jess ta hush em'
Dat's how you know dat....



Hook:
I'm A Mobsta
Betta Yet A Gangsta
Neva Fuk Wit Wankstas
Quick Ta Put A Hole Through A Pranksta
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Old 10-16-04, 03:50 AM   #2
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yall gimme some feedbac
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Old 10-16-04, 04:08 AM   #3
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i.....lmao....at this peice of shit......need more vocab betta structure etc.....
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Old 10-16-04, 04:15 AM   #4
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Intro yo shit is jess like yo name
"SHORT AN UNMEANINGFUL"
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Old 10-16-04, 07:39 AM   #5
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That was nice man would sound better on audio I think
I do think you need to use a bit more depth and better
vocab. The this would be a pretty on tune.

Stay up man

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Old 10-16-04, 08:34 PM   #6
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Thanks bra.................keep tha feedbac comin
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Old 10-17-04, 08:20 AM   #7
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it wuz ok da hook wuz tite wuznt feelin dat first verse da hook wuz nice it wuz and ok drop homie
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