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Old 11-13-03, 01:04 PM   #1
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BrandNEW~I Will Play My Game Beneath The Spin Light

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~brandnew~this song is amazingly written~
The time has come for colds and overcoats. We're quiet on the ride, we're all just waiting to get home. Another week away, my greatest fear. I need the smell of summer, I need its noises in my ears. If looks could really kill, then my profession would be staring. Please know we do this cause we care and not for the thrill. Collect calls to home to tell them that I realize that everyone who lives will someday die and die alone. And we won't let you in. Though we're down and out. We won't let you in. I wrote more postcards than hooks. I read more maps than books. Feel like every chance to leave is another chance I should have took. Every minute is a mile. I've never felt so hallow. I'm an old abandoned church with broken pews and empty aisles. My secrets for a buck. Watch me as I cut myself wide open on this stage. Yes, I am paid to spill my guts. I won't see home till spring. Oh, I would kill for the Atlantic, but I am paid to make girls panic while I sing. And we won't let you in. Though we're down and out.
We won't let you in. And we won't let you in. We don't want what isn't ours. We won't let you in. You win. And the coastline is quiet. While we're quietly losing control. Yes, we're silent but sure we inventened the cure that will wash out my memories of her. "The harpoon is loaded. The cage is lowered. The water is red." Like you.


Wow, if anyone knows what touring and just the overall life of it is like...i think you can relate to this.....

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Old 11-13-03, 11:23 PM   #2
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I'm an old abandoned church with broken pews and empty aisles. My secrets for a buck. Watch me as I cut myself wide open on this stage.

~decent analogy if it is that...collection plate...secrets..
~our words are priceless though and provoking
~most people think its just filler though

your relating to a former relationship and singing or rapping
is pretty much the light at the tunnels end for people like us

anyone whos been far away from home can relate as well

Pittsburghs nothing like las vegas and
Las Vegas is nothing like pittsburgh
I got family on both coasts and getting
away is good but theres always a downside
and I definately got that from reading this

better than what most decide to scribble down...
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