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Old 01-01-05, 10:01 PM   #1
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Deadly Vision diss...

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Me and DV have no beef...he just no-showed for our battle...don't want this to go to waste...link in my sig...

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Old 01-01-05, 10:20 PM   #2
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send me that beat.
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Old 01-01-05, 10:54 PM   #3
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^^No feed...mother fucka haha...come on peeps, need some feed...
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Old 01-02-05, 12:41 PM   #4
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ok good flow here and nice punches as well i liked the lyrics but the beat aint fit them its a dope ass beat but you shouldve used a harder beat thats more of a deep story beat that you got here .
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Old 01-02-05, 12:55 PM   #5
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O....no.....u dont say my name in a verse ...u need to set it up......
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.anyways ur flow was off in sum spots...dont ever use the effects in the beginning
of ur verse other than that it was safe.....now set the battle up
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Old 01-02-05, 12:59 PM   #6
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^^Haha, I didn't say anythin bad...fuck you mean audio? I need some battles closed first, but then I will set it up...be prepared...
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Old 01-03-05, 08:49 AM   #7
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pretty nice shit man i like it. you a pretty sick rapper.
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Old 01-03-05, 08:50 AM   #8
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i want that quality u got there too. i gotta buy a good mic.
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Old 01-03-05, 12:32 PM   #9
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Aight the beat was ok...the melody was hot but other than that it was average...The quality wasnt...clear enough for me to hear....ya flow sounded off a little at times but after listenin a second time it got better....ya lyrics were par at best....but overall im gonna give it a 7/10....not bad but not great either....ok job
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