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11-07-03, 01:14 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Have U Ever Had…(feat. Yaz)
IP: CD76 910C
Have U Ever Had…
By Uski yo have u ever had that feelin... where u just dont care wat happens.. this explains those moments.... [Chorus]- Have u ever had that felling in ya throat when ur about to choke// Have you ever felt like ur lifes is 1 bigg joke// Have you ever had a day when u think u got a shit life// Have you ever had that feeling when ur going through strife// [Verse 1]-UsKi yo yo mi real name is Ricky// but mi m8 call me UsKi// if ya wanna kno how get mi name// i got it off taggen and off da rap game// and now i got quite alot of fame// and wen i rip u ill put ur name to shame// So ne bitch dat calls me 11// I will shoot em up wit a AK-47// man ima da 1 da only spitten wit no liven// maken ya choke wif mi rhymes dat ima given// how am I gonna finish this verse I cant deside// after ima done wit u....will commit suicide// man thinken whitch way I should run// running away from allthose men with guns// saying I kill there daughter// trying to arrest me 4 man slaughter// [Chorus] Have u ever had that felling in ya throat when ur about to choke// Have you ever had that felling like ur lifes is 1 bigg joke// Have you ever had a day when u think u got a shit life// Have you ever had that feeling when ur going through strife// {Beat Change} <~(Yaz)~>(\1/)<~(Forsaken)~> have you ever had your life, fucked-over, and flipped *upside-down*// it makes you feel like your fallin, and you'll never *hit-the-ground*// shit backs up and rewinds, like your odds *just-stacked*// cuz people don't evan know you, but they talkin to *much-smack*// this is the reign of fire, were all *hell-is-unleashed*// you shoulda kept-it to-yourself, now your *facin-a-beast*// the livin forsaken one sent from the prince *of-the-dark*// the angle with the scabbed wings, came back to *leave-my-mark*// cuttin through souls-and-rymes, like realy *is-that-so-bad*// I'm just takein the shit, that you *clearly-never-had*// [Chorus]x2 Have u ever had that felling in ya throat when ur about to choke// Have you ever had that felling like ur lifes is 1 bigg joke// Have you ever had a day when u think u got a shit life// Have you ever had that feeling when ur going through strife// Last edited by -uski- : 11-09-03 at 12:42 AM. |
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11-07-03, 01:16 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: CD76 910C
yo we want som feed bak on this
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11-07-03, 01:27 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: A9AC 4434
ya fo real check this shit out and send some feedback yo
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11-07-03, 02:17 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: CD76 910C
yo uppin 4 feedback yall
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11-07-03, 11:48 AM | #5 | |||||||
one wink
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IP: B691 B3C4
Your links to others Open Mics?
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11-07-03, 07:21 PM | #6 | ||||||
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11-07-03, 07:28 PM | #7 | |||||||
Just call me your Savior
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IP: BB8C D4B2
yo, uski, yaz was holdin u up wit this, i wouldn't just stopped readin if i didn't know another person had spit on this, yaz, good spit keep it up
elevate...
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11-09-03, 12:17 AM | #8 | |||||||
<~(BlOoDTiK ThOuGhTz)~>
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IP: A9AC 4434
yo thanx dawg
guess il keep it crackin this time Peace(\1/) ps UPPIN FO SOME FEED BACK |
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11-09-03, 12:41 AM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: 792C 0F72
yo any otha votes ??
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11-09-03, 01:09 AM | #10 | ||||||
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damn... alot of spam
your hook was ok... I liked "that"... but the first verse had absolutely nothing to do with the hook... you have got to stay on topic,... but the second verse was on topic and its a good verse... I liked that... this peice could have been much better if uski would have stayed on topic... next collab... make sure you both know the topic so your verses have the right content. ~AshY~ |
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