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07-26-08, 01:07 AM | #1 | ||||
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just a lil somethin
IP: 4072 89F6
wow its been a while since i dropped a track in here....so uhh yea some shit i just did tonight with this dude from another site....word tryin to bring the song forum back with everyone else....tell me what you think of it...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...&songID=6752181
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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07-26-08, 02:15 PM | #2 | ||||||
...Jea...
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IP: 7FFF F45C
listenin...
1st cat-good vibe, emotion, etc...likin the lyrics too, good shit...chorus comes in nicely 2nd-sounds kinda like first guy lol but i dont like the flow as much...decent lyrics but first over did this, good emotion tho kinda hard to hear sometimes when the back ground singin cuts in...not bad tho like it tho good shit |
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07-26-08, 05:04 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 4072 89F6
haha cool i like the feed seeing how im the first guy, ha....thanks bro
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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07-28-08, 02:04 PM | #4 | ||||
L.E
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IP: DB16 D9CD
This is pretty sick.
Who made the beat for this? Sounds like a Sinema beat. Who's singing? Both verses were pretty good flow wise and everything...pretty good track actually. Lyrics are fitting. Holy FUCK at the guitar and shit. That part is absolutely dope. Downloaded. Sick stuff. Keep it up. |
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07-28-08, 04:31 PM | #5 | |||||||
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: D98D 2111
yeah this is good. i think u should talk a little bit over the hook though so it sounds more like u had something to do with it cuz the beat and singer is fly, but for sure talk some shit along wit the hooks
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07-29-08, 01:36 AM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 4072 89F6
thanks guys....n yea some more coulda been done with the hook to personalize it, but its not my track im just a verse on his track so anytihng like that ill let him tackle that beast
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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08-25-08, 12:36 PM | #7 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 4072 89F6
my ego is making me up this one again
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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