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Old 10-24-05, 03:42 PM   #1
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DIE DIE DIE DAMN SHITTY SONG!!!!!!1THIS WAS WHACK DONT LEAVE FEED CHECK

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Old 10-24-05, 03:48 PM   #2
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shits aiigh....like I said on msn.. qaulity..is a no no..presencre and delivery is dope...rest aiigh...keep up
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Old 10-24-05, 03:48 PM   #3
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beat starts off ugly...

gets annoyin the beat.


voice kicks in,

flows decent you sound a bit hight pitched / young,

lyrics are good...

hooks safe.



not bad mate.
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Old 10-24-05, 03:49 PM   #4
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Not Bad, Not Bad...you had some nice vocabulary...and flow....hook was dope...put that ho to sleep

fuck that WHOOP THAT TRICK SON!

good beat....dope beat..good flow.....i like the adlibs on the hoook....powerfull audio piece hear.......overall 8/10...keep at it....peace
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Old 10-24-05, 03:57 PM   #5
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I could hear when your MIC or whatever came on...the hiss was way too noticeable

ur vocals are too loud

ur flow is good though

ur delivery isn't bad...because ur emotion is there...but u need to learn how to use ur voice (tone/inflections)...ur young, so you'll have time to figure it out...Basically, try to make yoiur raps more melodic and not monotone


ur flow is def. on in this...can't hate on that


and I like the tone of the track...it's dark


7/10

good shit...work on those levels though


P.S...Lyrics were decent at best...u can elevate that too



RTF...if u haven't already

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Old 10-24-05, 04:00 PM   #6
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Old 10-24-05, 05:47 PM   #7
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i like the beat a LOT...u sound real young tho,and ur shit clips a lot on the chorus,flow is old school..aww man,the beat KEEPS GETTIN BETTER...chorus is ok,lyrics not real deep but point taken i guess..
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Old 10-25-05, 05:45 AM   #8
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Thx For Feed^^^Upping...........
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Old 10-25-05, 09:47 AM   #9
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Old 11-14-05, 12:51 PM   #10
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Just saw this...may as well leave feed...

Can't comment on the beat...cause I made it haha....

But anyway...quality sucks...you can tell that this is old. Flow is really messed up I found...Like it wasnt structured very good. I dunno...its an old track so it doesnt matter.
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Old 11-14-05, 12:53 PM   #11
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Lol@you Leaving Fed But Thx

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