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Old 02-14-09, 04:33 PM   #1
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Since everyone else posts their shit here hahaha. The 6th track i've ever recorded in my life. Chorus, verses and dubs done in one take, no mixing. Fuck it! Feel this shit if you're Irish!!!

Oh and yea, try and catch the subliminal shot ahahaha

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Old 02-14-09, 05:29 PM   #2
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is the subliminal shot where ur taking about ladies, and there being 4 on the floor, then having ur dick in their spouse? thats kinda weird. Anyways, not really diggin it too much. woord.

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Old 02-14-09, 05:29 PM   #3
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yea yea Tha Q makes a track and everyone posts in the thread and I do and no one has shit to say

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Old 02-14-09, 06:06 PM   #4
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lyrics on the first verse were sick.wasnt feeling the second one.third verse was alright,voice is monotone as fuck though,and u need to turn the beat up you vocals are to loud.
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and i thought u were jewish
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Old 02-14-09, 06:09 PM   #6
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and i thought u were jewish


well of course, did you not hear in the beggining when he said "I got a lot of doe you will never see josh go broke"

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but on the real I didn't like it delicvery was wack couldn't stand it mic preacence is bad need a better mic and someone to mix it for you.......but the lyrics were ok I guess just need to work on the delivery and mic confidence, lol it wasn't as bad as I said, and I feel ya gota work with the equipment you have.
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Yessir, thanks a lot guys. Well I was kinda trying to be monotone on this since it's more of a commercial thing but I guess it didn't work in my favor, I don't care enough bout this to re-record with more emotion though haha. And aight thanks for letting me know the vocals are too loud, I'll remember that for my next track.

As for a better mic, im only getting one of those eventually along with the rest of my audio software I need to record better... and I don't mix my shit, don't know how, i'll learn eventually but til then my tracks got no mixing lol

how's the flow guys?

And thanks for all the criticism cheyah

And yes I'm Russian/Jew on my dads side and Irish/Scottish on my moms
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is the subliminal shot where ur taking about ladies, and there being 4 on the floor, then having ur dick in their spouse? thats kinda weird. Anyways, not really diggin it too much. woord.

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uh no the subliminal shot was at poetic

"you sorta like poetic most you gettin is phone sex"

hahaha

And it's SPOUSH atleast I think it's spelt like that haha...
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Old 02-14-09, 06:57 PM   #10
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rofl@the hook
josh where's ur french accent.......n did i hear u say poetic's only gettin phonesex?
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haha, I'm not french so i don't have a french accent

and yea... yea I said it

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*kills you* lol
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nnnnnooooooooooooooooooo
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how dare u say that about my aj
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Old 02-14-09, 07:04 PM   #15
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hahahahaha poor poor AJ
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