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Old 04-08-03, 07:14 PM   #1
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More raps, tell me how i'm doin

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yo yo yo...damn this kid is so whack
certainly he deserves a smack
cuz hes lackin and smackin
he sucks so bad he cant even start mackin...(ouch)
yo watch out now
ima bout to flip out and then..POW
as amatter of fact ima gonna do it now
i dont even wanna hear what u ahve to say..
u a lil QT, are you gay?
when i hear ur rhymes it makes me sick
sounds so bad u sound like backstreet boy nick...
hey maybe if u good
u can kick it in da hood
but not wit me
noooo u cant mess wit me
can u see?
ima gonna be a winner, let alone a MC...
walkin round wit those baggy clothes
tryin to attract those god damn hoes...
yeah right
u need to be tight...
ahh u so bad u sound like lil bow wow on "Like mike"


I'm tryin to work on my audio ones, if anyone would like to help me out then please email me at sportzplaya3001@hotmail.com

i'm tryin to write songs those of you wit record deals..let me know how they are...
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Old 04-08-03, 07:54 PM   #2
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I don't know what was the deal callin' me out on my own thread in the Members Pic section but...ummm... check your pm.

Ohh yhea your little rhyme up there^^^^, that bullshit was wack.
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Old 04-08-03, 07:57 PM   #3
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sorryman, just lookin for some help...if u wanna help me out, let me know, we could be tight yo
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Old 04-08-03, 08:55 PM   #4
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I see potential in you. Now, if you keep writing shit like that above, then you will never reach it. Not that I am one to critcise, because I'm not a great MC myself. Heres my idea for you: write about something, rather than spouting drivel about nothing. It can be something violent if you wanna battle rap, or something meaningful that you wanna talk about. Just something, for the love of god man.
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