this is my first track ever.....i put sumthin together in like 15 min.......let me know if its any good or if i have potential......dont be too harsh...lol

thanks


B-Dub's Music

word? i just starting doing audios about a week ago also ... and your from ohio? what part.. i stay down here in columbus.. ill check this track out now


- yeah this shit ok.. i mean its not the best of tracks.. your lyrics are corny at times.. that hickery dickery or whatever the hell it is you were saying was stupid.. other than that for a first audio i think its ok.. you need to cut out on the cornyness in your lyrics next time though

other than that for a first audio your flow was mediocre but ok.. i think you might have potential

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up by lima.....drop a link, ill peep your shit

yeah actually ive got like close to 4 tracks done.. ive yet to upload this freestyle that i just did today but i got 2 other tracks up on my soundclick page listen to them and tell me what you think http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/mcpatmusic.htm

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