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one mic 0 0%
KempoMRK 5 100.00%
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Old 09-01-05, 09:17 AM   #1
KempoMRK
The Saviour
 
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From: England
one mic vs KempoMRK

IP: 8145 E511

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Old 09-01-05, 09:18 AM   #2
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KempoMRK has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-05 09:18 AM.
 
Old 09-01-05, 09:36 AM   #3
KempoMRK
The Saviour
 
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From: England
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I'll post real fast cos it doesn't take long to rip ya,
Leaving your 'camp' mind 'concentrated' as if I'm 'Adolf Hitler',
You joined before me and I'm still a hundred times as dope,
You could easily pass for an 'atheist'...'God's' giving you no 'hope',
I'll merk you like my name suggests yet I'm missing an E,
Damn, I could be missing a brain and you'd still struggle against me,
Ha dude, i've noticed that you like posting pitiful drops
Shame, cos 'Nas' is the only one who gives 'One Mic' props.
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Old 09-01-05, 09:41 AM   #4
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one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-05 09:41 AM.
 
Old 09-01-05, 09:49 AM   #5
J.D
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From: UK
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C’mon man, kempo, you and I both know you aint hot/
Wots up wit your sig??, cuz there’s sumthin that luks similar to a cock/
You think that’s kool??? Well I don’t, but gud for you/
Your flow’s tacky like ringtone adverts on channel U*/
You aint creative, you bore me like playin scrabble/
Wanna elevate, but your posts are mainly bad votes in battles/
Why we even battlin, im out of your range for certain/
You dope?? How???, wen you got beat by a nameless person!!

*Channel U is a uk hip-hop channel
 
Old 09-01-05, 09:50 AM   #6
J.D
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haha gud drop man. uppin this shit................
 
Old 09-01-05, 10:06 AM   #7
Thassarap
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From: Valhalla
This was feedback posted for KempoMRK

IP: D673 57C3

would rtf, but no crew votes allowed..............
 
Old 09-01-05, 11:11 AM   #8
Vaskez
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Voted For: KempoMRK

I'll post real fast cos it doesn't take long to rip ya,
Leaving your 'camp' mind 'concentrated' as if I'm 'Adolf Hitler',
^^okish but worded as threat and badly worded anyway
You joined before me and I'm still a hundred times as dope,
You could easily pass for an 'atheist'...'God's' giving you no 'hope',
^^concept is not bad, needed better wording to make it hit hard
I'll merk you like my name suggests yet I'm missing an E,
Damn, I could be missing a brain and you'd still struggle against me,
^^too simple
Ha dude, i've noticed that you like posting pitiful drops
Shame, cos 'Nas' is the only one who gives 'One Mic' props.
^^ok

vs.

C’mon man, kempo, you and I both know you aint hot/
Wots up wit your sig??, cuz there’s sumthin that luks similar to a cock/
^^no. gay.
You think that’s kool??? Well I don’t, but gud for you/
Your flow’s tacky like ringtone adverts on channel U*/
^^too simple
You aint creative, you bore me like playin scrabble/
Wanna elevate, but your posts are mainly bad votes in battles/
^^nah
Why we even battlin, im out of your range for certain/
You dope?? How???, wen you got beat by a nameless person!!
^^too simple

no hate, just opinion

vote in my sig please
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Old 09-01-05, 12:06 PM   #9
J.D
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ight then. uppin..................................
 
Old 09-01-05, 05:44 PM   #10
J.D
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Old 09-02-05, 07:22 AM   #11
J.D
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uppin this........................................
 
Old 09-02-05, 09:51 AM   #12
KempoMRK
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From: England
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I leave votes all over the place asking for return votes, and STILL no one votes? What the fuck?

Upping. Come on, vote, leave and link and I'll definitely vote on your battle.
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Old 09-02-05, 12:53 PM   #13
J.D
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yer init man, no1 votes. uppin this!!.....................
 
Old 09-02-05, 03:42 PM   #14
Young_law
This Is My City
 
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From: Chicago
IP: 7A52 73B1

Voted For: KempoMRK

damn kempo got dis by a long shot his punches were way better, one mic u harldy had any punches, i liked the adolf hitler line one mic the only line i liked was your last line because it was a good personal but overall kempo gets this vote
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Old 09-02-05, 05:44 PM   #15
DQ
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From: Alosta City
IP: 47A6 5A95

Voted For: KempoMRK

KempoMRK

I'll post real fast cos it doesn't take long to rip ya,
Leaving your 'camp' mind 'concentrated' as if I'm 'Adolf Hitler',
^nice wordplay in second line, first is bleh 6/10

You joined before me and I'm still a hundred times as dope,
You could easily pass for an 'atheist'...'God's' giving you no 'hope',
^lmao @ second line, giggled at that, first is ok 7/10

I'll merk you like my name suggests yet I'm missing an E,
Damn, I could be missing a brain and you'd still struggle against me,
^haha, nice going against yourself but turning it into punch 8/10

Ha dude, i've noticed that you like posting pitiful drops
Shame, cos 'Nas' is the only one who gives 'One Mic' props.
^good nameplay, aight punch 6/10

Total: 27/40 = 67,5%, work bit more on creativity maybe and better first lines, better built-ups to make punch hit harder


one mic

C’mon man, kempo, you and I both know you aint hot/
Wots up wit your sig??, cuz there’s sumthin that luks similar to a cock/
^don't get the last line, first one is bleh...3/10

You think that’s kool??? Well I don’t, but gud for you/
Your flow’s tacky like ringtone adverts on channel U*/
^nice wordplay in second line, wasnt feeling first 6/10

You aint creative, you bore me like playin scrabble/
Wanna elevate, but your posts are mainly bad votes in battles/
^nah at first line, good punch with personal touch in second 6/10

Why we even battlin, im out of your range for certain/
You dope?? How???, wen you got beat by a nameless person!!
^nice shit 7/10

Total: 22/40 = 55%, work on more hardhitting punches with personal touch and complexity aight...

RTF on link in sig (against chip)...thanks...
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