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This Is More of a Topic of Debate..not all spitagree but we are showing our views on violence all thru KEYSTYLE:

Krucial
growin up as a corrupted~seed,my style was 'Fuck~wit~me',
church?,i "COULDNT SEE DA LIGHT" if an "ALIEN UBDUCTED~ME".
makin my way,tryna find da rite~path,
introduced to gangs,thinkin da life might~last.
but i said fuck this,picked a gat up n loaded~it,
exploadin~clips,getaway clean-hit da house party-start bonin'~chicks.
i was curious~fast,cops saw us makin mysterious~cash,
mind deterioratin,thinkin bout da outcome of loadin serious~straps.
sippin syrup~in~glass,rappin-fans wanna hear~us~-and~fast,
"NEVER LISTENED" to adults,like my "EARs~NOT~ATTATCHED".
plottin~robberies,dreams of hoppin~out~wit~g's($),
contemplatin if i shouldnt go outside n pop~it~out~wit~ease.
i wanna live like this,but i gotta guilty~concience,
hoping that 1 day i'd wake up n realize my life is silly~nonsense.

Stunonezz
pure horror and violence imagine all da thugz and killaz CONDONIN-BUSINESS and all da pimpz and da playaz runnin cornaz and OWNIN-BITCHEZ, ROAMIN-wit-PITCHAZ in da pocket and niggaz iz HOLDIN-FIGUREZ and BOILING-HITZ itz becomin ezier 2 stack my money up and FOLDIN-DIGITZ//
itz new jack city da place whwer u TAKE-WUT-U-NEED crack headz need dat hit guess wut niggaz u MAKIN-DAT-CHEESE, soo dont comin EDGIN-WIT-PLEASE beggin aint NEVA-APPLEASED cuz my niggaz iz killaz dey take da gat and put ya brainz on da ground nigga u could BET-ITZ-WIT-EASE//
da reel game neva pause soo gunz and violence iz LIFE-LIVEN my GRINDZ-SPITTEN yet i could hustle my money and death will have ur SPINE-TINGLING, MIND-SPINNIN-TIME-GRIMING-LIFE-LINE-LEAPIN-and stay rockin dat FINE-LINEN and bulletz popped in da air leave u BLIND and earz RINGIN......


Samurai
Call it carnage, call it mayhem the blood shed is amen
I see beauty it brutally beating holly figures or religious men
That shit stems from thorns topping this god send
Crucify the philosophers and support violent ends
Cut me my blood spills and the outer image fades
Beat me, my epidermis is 20 different purple shades
Born in a tear drop falling to splat on a forsaken rock
But fear not the violence is an illusion proving mental rot

PnC aka Outgoin' aka Tha Promota
You see guns are an “unbeleivable” agent of an “unreasonable” –evil-, that’s “unconceivable”. We all know stopping them’s “unachievable”, but we may still make the agenda a lot more “feasible”..
They’re the –invention- that rids of my “people”, and no –redemption- awaits the system, we are black, just left to rot under a church “steeple”..
Cause there’s no life in the hood, we are “born-to-survive”. Guns are just a code that we are “sworn-to-abide”. Locked up between life and struggle, in “thorns-we-reside”; we must stop the violence before our faithful “scorn-turns’ to-lies”..
Black hands up in “prayer”, Black guns up in “fear”, Dyin' wish to touch the “air”. Left On the sidewalk, seekin' a heaven that wasn't “there”. We need to rehash the system, get rid of the guns we “bare”. Young leaders, caught on the corner, shot, eyes not to see another “year”..
I used to think I was “givin-to-let-leads-fly”, an insensitive blood, “unforgiving-to-let-heads-lie”. But then I grew up, realized we just “livin’-for-death-bed’s-eye”. Either that or we locked up, guns are fiction, they made for the “shivering-feds-n-red-skies”..
We gotta take a –stand-, I seen too many niggaz “die-in-da -streets”.
I aint a pussy, its time to be a –man-, I used to let it “fly-in-tha-heat”, but now im on top of the game and I see how babies are “fried-up-like-yeast”, we gotta put a pause on the -band-. Guns just make black mothers “cry-to-their-preist”..
So now I’m “attackin-the system”, bringin a rebuttle to the blacks and “latins-in-prison”. Now they are “faction-of-riddince” and guns, all cause of ‘get rich or die tryin’, niggaz persuaded by the “attraction-of-one”, the gun.. STOP THE VIOLENCE

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I thought this was pretty good. Everyone had a nice verse. But you should work on ur structure so the reader will be able to flow thru it better. Other than that i thought it was fine. I liked that it was a debate rather than just talking about guns and that type of life. It gave it a nice feel. But good job keep it up.

ya it was ment for audio .. so the structure aint to pure..


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